for Heart Broken8/24/2006 c32 
4Chidori no Tenshi
oh plz keep uploading! we're ALL WAITING! and tho i dont mean to pressure u...plz hurry! its a wonderful story!
p.s. r there any stories on this site that r already completed?
4Chidori no Tenshioh plz keep uploading! we're ALL WAITING! and tho i dont mean to pressure u...plz hurry! its a wonderful story!
p.s. r there any stories on this site that r already completed?
8/24/2006 c4 5kougarocks98
kay go back and delete the authors notes from the story, it really turns ppl off
5kougarocks98kay go back and delete the authors notes from the story, it really turns ppl off
8/24/2006 c11 8Psychoticmonkey
Damnit! Qiut bien SO DAMN OBVOIS!
ahem.I am bi polor.
any ways. On to reading!
8PsychoticmonkeyDamnit! Qiut bien SO DAMN OBVOIS!
ahem.I am bi polor.
any ways. On to reading!
8/24/2006 c2 5kougarocks98
yay u changed it!
(just so u know im not reviewing every chaapter if u thought so)
5kougarocks98yay u changed it!
(just so u know im not reviewing every chaapter if u thought so)
8/24/2006 c1 kougarocks98
aw sad. but i just thought id let u know, her name is SANGO! not songo,m SANGO! change it pls cause its gonna get on my nerves
aw sad. but i just thought id let u know, her name is SANGO! not songo,m SANGO! change it pls cause its gonna get on my nerves
8/24/2006 c10 8Psychoticmonkey
WHY THE HELL IS EVERYONE SO DAMN EMOTIONAL! SANGO WOULDN'T CRY JUST BECAUSE SHE WAS TELLING SOMETHING ABOUT SOMEONE DUMBASS!
ahem. any way. great story so far.
8PsychoticmonkeyWHY THE HELL IS EVERYONE SO DAMN EMOTIONAL! SANGO WOULDN'T CRY JUST BECAUSE SHE WAS TELLING SOMETHING ABOUT SOMEONE DUMBASS!
ahem. any way. great story so far.
8/24/2006 c32 magnetboy1
Yet another great chapter! I really enjoyed editing this one. Keep the good stuff coming, and watch out for spelling and grammatical mistakes. Can't wait for the next one. You've got us all hooked, and that's important when you're writing a story. Once again, keep up the good work, champ.
Best,
-You Know Who.
Yet another great chapter! I really enjoyed editing this one. Keep the good stuff coming, and watch out for spelling and grammatical mistakes. Can't wait for the next one. You've got us all hooked, and that's important when you're writing a story. Once again, keep up the good work, champ.
Best,
-You Know Who.
8/17/2006 c31 Beckah
I love your story. I hope that you will post more soon. Ican't get enough of it. i check it evryday to see if you updated yet. Your a great writer and i hope i could be as good as you are.
I love your story. I hope that you will post more soon. Ican't get enough of it. i check it evryday to see if you updated yet. Your a great writer and i hope i could be as good as you are.
8/16/2006 c31 DXfangirl18
WOW ! This story is totally amazing ! It must have taken you a long old time to write 30 whole chapters ! I could never write that much ... please update soon !
WOW ! This story is totally amazing ! It must have taken you a long old time to write 30 whole chapters ! I could never write that much ... please update soon !
8/15/2006 c31 4Vampiress Yugure
COOKIE! *grabs and munches*
Hope, *munch* you get, *gulp* to update soon! *finishes cookie*
WAH! I WANT ANOTHER COOKIE! *pouts*
4Vampiress YugureCOOKIE! *grabs and munches*
Hope, *munch* you get, *gulp* to update soon! *finishes cookie*
WAH! I WANT ANOTHER COOKIE! *pouts*
8/15/2006 c31 7Angel Marie Winchester
i loved it hope you update soon and it's added to fav's *smiles* have fun updateing see ya
7Angel Marie Winchesteri loved it hope you update soon and it's added to fav's *smiles* have fun updateing see ya
8/15/2006 c31 9Sansantehslayer
naraku the evil little piece of crap killed kane, kaome's and inuyasha's dads, shippos parents and i bet he killed sango's mom. I WANT TO KILL HIM SO BAD THAT IF HE WAS STANDING INFRONT OF ME HE WOULD ONLY SEE A FLASH BEFORE I STRANGLED HIM WITH MY OWN HANDS AND YELLED SO LOUD THAT THE WHOLE BLOCK WOULD WAKE UP AND YELL AT ME! (i have a phycotic side that when someone sees it they won't talk to me for a few weeks... i can get scary and i'm only 15. i love the story and always wanted to kill naraku so don't worry. i love inuyasha I'M OBSESSED AND PROUD OF IT!
9Sansantehslayernaraku the evil little piece of crap killed kane, kaome's and inuyasha's dads, shippos parents and i bet he killed sango's mom. I WANT TO KILL HIM SO BAD THAT IF HE WAS STANDING INFRONT OF ME HE WOULD ONLY SEE A FLASH BEFORE I STRANGLED HIM WITH MY OWN HANDS AND YELLED SO LOUD THAT THE WHOLE BLOCK WOULD WAKE UP AND YELL AT ME! (i have a phycotic side that when someone sees it they won't talk to me for a few weeks... i can get scary and i'm only 15. i love the story and always wanted to kill naraku so don't worry. i love inuyasha I'M OBSESSED AND PROUD OF IT!