for Scerene Daisy5/4/2010 c1 
2Lucyole
it is a good one why do you wrote not further
i wanted to read what happend next it wheres nice when you wrote mor of them
2Lucyoleit is a good one why do you wrote not further
i wanted to read what happend next it wheres nice when you wrote mor of them
7/25/2007 c1 9Yellowsakura
pretty good! but needs more activity and more explaination!~ good job though!~
9Yellowsakurapretty good! but needs more activity and more explaination!~ good job though!~
7/4/2007 c1 1CantThinkOfAnamelol
it was great! a few grammer errors but what ever i could under stand! it was really good for our first story! i cant think up storys that well! thanks for making this!
1CantThinkOfAnamelolit was great! a few grammer errors but what ever i could under stand! it was really good for our first story! i cant think up storys that well! thanks for making this!
7/9/2006 c1 5Elemental Dragon1
Neji calls Hinata, Hinata-sama..and Hinata calls Neji, Neji-nii-san...thats something...about your grammer..you'll just have to learn it better. I cant exactly tell you every mistake you made...cause you made a good amount of them. Good luck with learning English!^_^
5Elemental Dragon1Neji calls Hinata, Hinata-sama..and Hinata calls Neji, Neji-nii-san...thats something...about your grammer..you'll just have to learn it better. I cant exactly tell you every mistake you made...cause you made a good amount of them. Good luck with learning English!^_^