
12/20/2006 c11 GGmadness2006
people always learn how they trully feel when they feel life may never be the same and so great job i totally loved the lit it was awsome it made sure to show off the tory connection which is great. you should really post another lit i bet it would be incredible!
people always learn how they trully feel when they feel life may never be the same and so great job i totally loved the lit it was awsome it made sure to show off the tory connection which is great. you should really post another lit i bet it would be incredible!
11/25/2006 c11 i never needed a prince
that was great!
that was great!
9/29/2006 c11 Kay
Your story was good...but your ending kinda sucked. This is just some constructive critism...but i think you developed this story 2 much...but the ending left some unanswered questions and was not clear. First of all..the thing w/ logan...u said he liked her?...so i think u should have added some more stuff about that...or have just not included him...u made it more complex...and then the whole dean thing...you could have extended more on that. But otherwise the story was good.
Your story was good...but your ending kinda sucked. This is just some constructive critism...but i think you developed this story 2 much...but the ending left some unanswered questions and was not clear. First of all..the thing w/ logan...u said he liked her?...so i think u should have added some more stuff about that...or have just not included him...u made it more complex...and then the whole dean thing...you could have extended more on that. But otherwise the story was good.
9/28/2006 c11
3Beauty in my Breakdown
Great job! I'm sad that you wanna end this story! I really liked it! Anyways! Write more son! Your's ubber good.

Great job! I'm sad that you wanna end this story! I really liked it! Anyways! Write more son! Your's ubber good.
9/27/2006 c11 Queen of Yozo
Hi, love the story. What are the songs name in the last chapter. Absolutley loved the lyric on the first one. Please answer me.
Hi, love the story. What are the songs name in the last chapter. Absolutley loved the lyric on the first one. Please answer me.
9/27/2006 c11 Amyq
yEAh your right that ending sucked, you worked so hard to make something that was really Really good and your ending sucked, but thats just my opinion
Always
Amy
yEAh your right that ending sucked, you worked so hard to make something that was really Really good and your ending sucked, but thats just my opinion
Always
Amy