5/30/2006 c1 3Pope-Man
That was awesome. In a single and stand alone chapter you managed to completely define the character you had. You showed all of his emotions and thoughts of what he did, I have to say, wonderfully done.

-Dylan

1/16/2006 c1 1Writer's Fingers
Well, I liked it. You're a very good writer! Such description. ^_^ IT was fun to read. Truly. I hope you do others like it sometime.

1/8/2006 c1 2Incogito
I like it! Its a little short, like you said - but, its skillfully writen, well done!

I hate to keep bringing this up, but, in TLC, you learn that Skorm/Avo aren't actualy real - there false idols...