
8/16/2022 c5
79Trevyler
So you’re probably long gone given it’s been 16 years but honestly I loved where this was good. Especially given how few fanfics this series has and even fewer Onizuka/Urumi fanfics.
Just read this series recently and she was my favorite of the girls hands down. Was surprised by how little content this fandom had but thank you for at least providing something even if it is short and unfinished.

So you’re probably long gone given it’s been 16 years but honestly I loved where this was good. Especially given how few fanfics this series has and even fewer Onizuka/Urumi fanfics.
Just read this series recently and she was my favorite of the girls hands down. Was surprised by how little content this fandom had but thank you for at least providing something even if it is short and unfinished.
1/29/2019 c5 Guest
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7/8/2012 c5
8Grey Wolf4
This is a good GTO fic with Onizuka/Urumi I like all of the six prospective pairings for Onizuka (Onizuka/Urumi, Onizuka/Azusa, Onizuka/Julia, Onizuka/Nanako, Onizuka/Tomoko and Onizuka/Miyabi) equally but I favor Urumi slightly.
Shame you haven't updated in six years but it seems you're reviewing so I hold out some hope you'll update.

This is a good GTO fic with Onizuka/Urumi I like all of the six prospective pairings for Onizuka (Onizuka/Urumi, Onizuka/Azusa, Onizuka/Julia, Onizuka/Nanako, Onizuka/Tomoko and Onizuka/Miyabi) equally but I favor Urumi slightly.
Shame you haven't updated in six years but it seems you're reviewing so I hold out some hope you'll update.
7/11/2011 c1
1Arc.dtml229
Great story. Love the Urumi/Onizuka pairing, but it is a shame that it hasn't been updated in over 5 years.

Great story. Love the Urumi/Onizuka pairing, but it is a shame that it hasn't been updated in over 5 years.
2/22/2010 c5 Sinewyk
Great work overall , too bad you doesn't seem to be updating anymore , would have loved to see it continued/finished :O
Great work overall , too bad you doesn't seem to be updating anymore , would have loved to see it continued/finished :O
12/1/2009 c5
2Hefeweizen
I just got back into GTO and came across this story. I loved the tone of the first two chapters- it was very sweet, exactly the dynamic I pictured between them. I always thought there was a lot of potential for these two as a couple. Nice work, keep it up!

I just got back into GTO and came across this story. I loved the tone of the first two chapters- it was very sweet, exactly the dynamic I pictured between them. I always thought there was a lot of potential for these two as a couple. Nice work, keep it up!
11/9/2009 c5 Kirstin
Yay! i really like it!
OnizukaXKanzaki was my fave most!
Good story bro!
Yay! i really like it!
OnizukaXKanzaki was my fave most!
Good story bro!
7/30/2009 c1
8Jho
My two favorite characters, I can't believe you're the only one to write a story featuring the pair.

My two favorite characters, I can't believe you're the only one to write a story featuring the pair.
7/8/2009 c5 Nathan
What an enjoyable story..too bad it's all dead.
What an enjoyable story..too bad it's all dead.
5/17/2009 c1 YoungKonoha
This is great. About time somebody wrote a good fanfic about Onizuka and Urumi.
This is great. About time somebody wrote a good fanfic about Onizuka and Urumi.
2/28/2009 c1
5Judah
Wanted to like it. I've always wanted to read a good story with Urumi/Onizuka, one that accurately portrays Urumi's intelligence. I'm not into this story; it's too emotionally reflective without enough real details. By that I mean the story is mostly dialogue, inner dialogue, and flashbacks. You aren't showing enough, and the settings aren't adding anything.
Maybe I'll give it another shot someday.

Wanted to like it. I've always wanted to read a good story with Urumi/Onizuka, one that accurately portrays Urumi's intelligence. I'm not into this story; it's too emotionally reflective without enough real details. By that I mean the story is mostly dialogue, inner dialogue, and flashbacks. You aren't showing enough, and the settings aren't adding anything.
Maybe I'll give it another shot someday.