for Dimensions1/30/2019 c3 Lizzie
Sorry, but Kendo unifroms can't be red. It's a traditional practise, and it's custonary to use a sort of really dark indigo coloured uniform. This is because of the special indigo dye used. It looks like navy generally, but if it isn't cared for properly can turn a musty pink. I'm pretty sure there's some point in proficiency where you can start to wear a kendo uniform that looks black than navy, but no red.
Sorry, but Kendo unifroms can't be red. It's a traditional practise, and it's custonary to use a sort of really dark indigo coloured uniform. This is because of the special indigo dye used. It looks like navy generally, but if it isn't cared for properly can turn a musty pink. I'm pretty sure there's some point in proficiency where you can start to wear a kendo uniform that looks black than navy, but no red.
11/29/2013 c13 
5Burnt Raspberry
it's good, but Sanomi is WAY too much of a Mary-Sue! not to mention, butterfly wings? Samurai? golden eyes? I wuz all like, 'WTF?'
5Burnt Raspberryit's good, but Sanomi is WAY too much of a Mary-Sue! not to mention, butterfly wings? Samurai? golden eyes? I wuz all like, 'WTF?'
9/3/2011 c20 Audrey
amazing!
amazing!
4/14/2010 c3 Someone who reads a lot
nice work but it could be better ( a lot better actually) keep practicing
nice work but it could be better ( a lot better actually) keep practicing
5/10/2009 c30 twilightchick13
I love your sasuke story its so amazing i cant wait until you write chapter 31. i do not have an account on this site but i do have an account on quizilla so if you look me up there you can send a message back the name is twilightchick13
I love your sasuke story its so amazing i cant wait until you write chapter 31. i do not have an account on this site but i do have an account on quizilla so if you look me up there you can send a message back the name is twilightchick13
2/7/2009 c1 avonda1030hotmail.com
hi this is avonda alleyne. I read your fanfic,its a great,it will be great continued if you write it into the shippuden,besides the shippuden is lousy and boring. keep up the good work.
hi this is avonda alleyne. I read your fanfic,its a great,it will be great continued if you write it into the shippuden,besides the shippuden is lousy and boring. keep up the good work.
12/5/2008 c1 avonda1030hotmail.com
Hi my name is avonda alleyne.I Read your fanfic,and i like the fanfic,.Are you going to finish the rest of the chapters into the shippuden arc saga,because it a great fanfic.let me know.
Hi my name is avonda alleyne.I Read your fanfic,and i like the fanfic,.Are you going to finish the rest of the chapters into the shippuden arc saga,because it a great fanfic.let me know.
1/2/2008 c1 6queercyberpunk
Well, i started reading this fic a little while ago. I found myself somewhat growing bored with your OC. Her personality is bland to me, and she suceeds at almost everything she tries. In the future when writing an OC, I reccomend making dominant features in their personality, not just 'some girl' that fell into the naruto world and magically became a great ninja. Have your character fail a few times and don't give her the easy victory. Make flaws and good traits more predominant, I highly reccomend thinking out a character before writing anything. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just trying to offer some constructive criticism.
6queercyberpunkWell, i started reading this fic a little while ago. I found myself somewhat growing bored with your OC. Her personality is bland to me, and she suceeds at almost everything she tries. In the future when writing an OC, I reccomend making dominant features in their personality, not just 'some girl' that fell into the naruto world and magically became a great ninja. Have your character fail a few times and don't give her the easy victory. Make flaws and good traits more predominant, I highly reccomend thinking out a character before writing anything. Please don't take this as a flame, I'm just trying to offer some constructive criticism.
4/19/2007 c30 14Talye Kendrin
OH. MY. GOSH.
You are an amazing writer. You do have a few grammatical errors, but other than that, I was simply enthralled by this story. It is so amazing. Agh! I must read more! -runs off to read the sequel-
14Talye KendrinOH. MY. GOSH.
You are an amazing writer. You do have a few grammatical errors, but other than that, I was simply enthralled by this story. It is so amazing. Agh! I must read more! -runs off to read the sequel-
2/24/2007 c30 3nira-chan
I'm a little confused...So this dimensions is over and you're staring another story that picks up where this one left off (basically a sequel)?
Anyways wonderful chapter! That was a nice twist (Sanomi being chosen as a baby to have the demon inside of her). Are you planning to have your story go along with the whole Naruto series?
3nira-chanI'm a little confused...So this dimensions is over and you're staring another story that picks up where this one left off (basically a sequel)?
Anyways wonderful chapter! That was a nice twist (Sanomi being chosen as a baby to have the demon inside of her). Are you planning to have your story go along with the whole Naruto series?
2/18/2007 c30 livi510
YAY! DEMON! MUAHAHHAHhAHAHAAHA...SUGAR...MUAHAHAHA...XDD. I'm still hyper! MUAHAHAHAH! LOL. *GLOMP* Ur the best too!
YAY! DEMON! MUAHAHHAHhAHAHAAHA...SUGAR...MUAHAHAHA...XDD. I'm still hyper! MUAHAHAHAH! LOL. *GLOMP* Ur the best too!