
3/4/2006 c3
13sangi
Just then Gramps walked into the kitchen. “Oh finally found a boyfriend have you. I was beginning to wonder if you were a lesb…”
Haha, nevermind. That is now my favorite line.

Just then Gramps walked into the kitchen. “Oh finally found a boyfriend have you. I was beginning to wonder if you were a lesb…”
Haha, nevermind. That is now my favorite line.
3/4/2006 c2 sangi
“So how has my woman been?”
I love that line. That must be my favorite line so far, because it just made me laugh out loud.
“So how has my woman been?”
I love that line. That must be my favorite line so far, because it just made me laugh out loud.
3/4/2006 c1 sangi
This is actually okay. Is it your first story? Let me see... yes, it is! Why, this is an actually okay piece of work for a first time fanfiction writer! Sorry, I just get a little annoyed at REALLY BAD stories, and I was glad this one wasn't! Now, let's read on...
This is actually okay. Is it your first story? Let me see... yes, it is! Why, this is an actually okay piece of work for a first time fanfiction writer! Sorry, I just get a little annoyed at REALLY BAD stories, and I was glad this one wasn't! Now, let's read on...
1/13/2006 c3
7gkinuwriter
aw! that was so cute. and no problem. i love reading stories on my freetime. either at school or at home when my older brother is off at least one of the computers. well g2g.

aw! that was so cute. and no problem. i love reading stories on my freetime. either at school or at home when my older brother is off at least one of the computers. well g2g.
1/12/2006 c3
1crimsontearsxx
*yawn* more excitement, drama, heated moments, and lemon please! lol im weird!

*yawn* more excitement, drama, heated moments, and lemon please! lol im weird!
1/12/2006 c2
7gkinuwriter
hey that was a great story so far! keep up the good work. just make the chapters a little long next time. but other than that, that was great! loved it.

hey that was a great story so far! keep up the good work. just make the chapters a little long next time. but other than that, that was great! loved it.