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5/15/2011 c2 FFHelaynia
This was sweet and sad but I know what happens, makes me happy knowing too :D

Sasuke's POV was good and in charcter if your asking me and Naruto POV was done well too :)
4/28/2011 c1 158goldfishlover73
It would have been amazing, had you not put in 'baka.'

I promise, using those words, the three japanese words you know, in a story, really disrupts the flow and brings down the quality of the work.

Other wise good job
1/26/2006 c2 4YoukoLover
well this proves interesting. seems like our minds run on similar lines. there definately seems like more then just rivalry between those two. i have to applaud your work. great job.
1/23/2006 c2 24Dragonist
I love it. It is so interesting to read. I hopr that you had as much fun writing this as I did reading this. The words have so much power, their own life. When you read it, they take on a world of their own. I hope that you have fun.

Great story, Dragonist
1/21/2006 c1 Dragonist
Oh, it is so sweet. I love this. For the next chapter (you have it under uncompleted) if you are doing one, do it on Narutos' thoughts when Sasuke takes the needles for him. This is so sad, yet so sweet. Just like life. Sometimes.

Life, Dragonist
1/21/2006 c1 animepuppy101
wow that was really good you should write more like that

:)

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