for Giving Birth to a Child from the Enemy
1612/17/2020 c1 Kenyatta.harmon16
Sirius/Severus. Love this pairings.
Please update I need more. Don't start a Amazing Story like this if you've not going to finish it. It's torture not knowing what happens next
Sirius/Severus. Love this pairings.
Please update I need more. Don't start a Amazing Story like this if you've not going to finish it. It's torture not knowing what happens next
7/23/2020 c2 Guest
You can explain potter’s parseltongue. In fact, it is explained and nobody in his family had it. And Snape wasn’t a parseltongue.
You can explain potter’s parseltongue. In fact, it is explained and nobody in his family had it. And Snape wasn’t a parseltongue.
2/11/2018 c5 Guest
I love the main theme (Snape's pregnancy and how he got it) but I hate Lily ik ik terrible and I'm kinda hating Alex so could you mabe have them get in a fight and start hating each other but very very whell written
I love the main theme (Snape's pregnancy and how he got it) but I hate Lily ik ik terrible and I'm kinda hating Alex so could you mabe have them get in a fight and start hating each other but very very whell written
6/7/2017 c7 TasteTheCronch
i didn't like Alex in this one that much and how can Severus be jealous i am confused i also hated how Alex and Lily laughed at Severus and they should have made sure that Severus is okay, he is pregnant, like seriously how can they laugh at him when he is truly concerned for Alex It's my opinion I'm sorry but i hate Alex and Lily in this one but I hate Alex more and this is why i kinda hate oc's
i didn't like Alex in this one that much and how can Severus be jealous i am confused i also hated how Alex and Lily laughed at Severus and they should have made sure that Severus is okay, he is pregnant, like seriously how can they laugh at him when he is truly concerned for Alex It's my opinion I'm sorry but i hate Alex and Lily in this one but I hate Alex more and this is why i kinda hate oc's
2/29/2016 c9 M-21
I WANT MORE!MEH!
I WANT MORE!MEH!
5/20/2015 c6 Guest
Ok no offence but tour story it's a little bit fuck up. How can ypu make Alex like the one of the tormentor of her brother and it's not like Lupin is confronting the marauder for theiridiotic behavior. Sorry but its doesn't make sense.
Ok no offence but tour story it's a little bit fuck up. How can ypu make Alex like the one of the tormentor of her brother and it's not like Lupin is confronting the marauder for theiridiotic behavior. Sorry but its doesn't make sense.
5/20/2015 c4 Guest
Well I think that alex is a bad sister to fall in love with one of a brother bullie even if it's lupin
Well I think that alex is a bad sister to fall in love with one of a brother bullie even if it's lupin
5/20/2015 c3 Guest
Good story but lack emotion of hatred and disgust, and severus doesn't really act like a rape victim
Good story but lack emotion of hatred and disgust, and severus doesn't really act like a rape victim
4/21/2015 c1 Guest
Loving this! Pregnant Severus is my guilty pleasure ..
I can't wait for the next updates and really, really,really hope you haven't dropped this.
Loving this! Pregnant Severus is my guilty pleasure ..
I can't wait for the next updates and really, really,really hope you haven't dropped this.