for Harry Potter the Son of the Half Vampire11/6/2012 c10 Guest
pls update quicker
pls update quicker
9/26/2010 c10 stacy abigail
The story is not finished. Beside the fact there are alot of typo's and spelling mistakes, mis-use of grammar and punctuation. It is a very good story, had i not been a very big harry potter fan you could've changed the names and no-one would've noticed. You're a very good writter, though your technique could be bettered. You continuously write as if the perspective has changed and it became a little confusing. How ever it is a good plot and you never lost track of your characters which is very good. Good luck with your ending i'd be very inthralled to read it.
The story is not finished. Beside the fact there are alot of typo's and spelling mistakes, mis-use of grammar and punctuation. It is a very good story, had i not been a very big harry potter fan you could've changed the names and no-one would've noticed. You're a very good writter, though your technique could be bettered. You continuously write as if the perspective has changed and it became a little confusing. How ever it is a good plot and you never lost track of your characters which is very good. Good luck with your ending i'd be very inthralled to read it.
51/1/2008 c10 shiftyless
Interesting, it sounds neat. I wqonder how Harry & Dudley will react 2 everything once they wake up & want 2 know about everything.
Interesting, it sounds neat. I wqonder how Harry & Dudley will react 2 everything once they wake up & want 2 know about everything.
12/8/2007 c3 Katiebird27
I'm confused...is it back to being regulus? maybe I should just finish the story then reveiw...that would probobly be a smart idea.
I'm confused...is it back to being regulus? maybe I should just finish the story then reveiw...that would probobly be a smart idea.
12/8/2007 c2 Katiebird27
I feel stupid, I wrote the reveiw then finshed the chapter...after I pushed submit I relized that you said he had brothers and sisters...stupid me!
I feel stupid, I wrote the reveiw then finshed the chapter...after I pushed submit I relized that you said he had brothers and sisters...stupid me!
10/26/2007 c10 phoenix
Who is Severus' father and what about Harry's dad?
Who is Severus' father and what about Harry's dad?
10/25/2007 c10 slitherinprincess3
the chapter didnt suck, i liked it. please write more as soon as you can
the chapter didnt suck, i liked it. please write more as soon as you can
10/25/2007 c10 Beth5572
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
Thank you,
Terri
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
Thank you,
Terri