for A Single Decision10/2/2007 c56 
5ALLRRPRP
Finally, an update! :) This is gonna be a true epic story... I shudder to think how many chapters there are still to come. Maybe I won't even live long enough to read the last chapter of this story... Anyway, I'm glad you're back, and I can't wait to see your version of my favorite KOF game - '98. Athena's overwhelmed with grief and remorse... Yummy! I would love it if you would expand on that a little. Hop to read from you soon. Cheers!
5ALLRRPRPFinally, an update! :) This is gonna be a true epic story... I shudder to think how many chapters there are still to come. Maybe I won't even live long enough to read the last chapter of this story... Anyway, I'm glad you're back, and I can't wait to see your version of my favorite KOF game - '98. Athena's overwhelmed with grief and remorse... Yummy! I would love it if you would expand on that a little. Hop to read from you soon. Cheers!
9/11/2007 c55 70Sheo Darren
Oh, my God.
This chapter is pure awesome. Athena a virtual Goddess. Everyone pouring in their bit to save the world. Elizabeth stepping in. Chris' awakening. Geese. GEESE!
And... Kyo... Athena just might have killed the person she loves... heartrending...
The stage is set for KOF 98. (NESTS... augh...) I can only hope that K' can live up to the expectation I have of him, seeing as all your portrayals have been downright earthshaking! And we'll see if Terry can still be redeemed.
Wishing you the best!
70Sheo DarrenOh, my God.
This chapter is pure awesome. Athena a virtual Goddess. Everyone pouring in their bit to save the world. Elizabeth stepping in. Chris' awakening. Geese. GEESE!
And... Kyo... Athena just might have killed the person she loves... heartrending...
The stage is set for KOF 98. (NESTS... augh...) I can only hope that K' can live up to the expectation I have of him, seeing as all your portrayals have been downright earthshaking! And we'll see if Terry can still be redeemed.
Wishing you the best!
9/11/2007 c54 Sheo Darren
Holy shit. Athena just knocked out everyone unworthy. Hell, even almighty Geese felt faint!
Wait... did Bison and the others also get knocked out?
... Aw...
- Athena though it odd and yet funny that the man that was in the most danger of being killed here was the one leading the charge. He might have escaped the Psycho Crusher… but Mr. Howard was living on borrowed time.
Never! Geese is now a HERO! And heroes always win- so long as they have courage!
Okay, I just sounded like someone from GaoGaiGar...
- The attacks were fast, the quartet being paralyzed by Iori flames before Kyo’s Orochinagi blasted them back into a wall.
That IS a good combo :)
- “I mean… you get your powers just goddamn handed to you… you never worked for them at all… being disciplined for years and years! How the hell do you think that feels like… training for your whole goddamn life and merely being a few steps ahead of some idiot that was in the right place at the right time!”
Wow. I'd never seen Kyo like this before. Jealous? Angry? A complete asshole with Shingo and Beni? Woah.
- “Kyo, Athena would only do this if it wouldn’t be something you normally would do,” Benimaru slowly said. “Therefor, it requires an amoral and objectionable action. Therefor, we have all the justification to fight you.”
lol Beni's big mouth does the job yet again lol
Shingo amazed me. First the Shingo Kick, then Burning Shingo, and now OROCHINAGI- I yelled aloud at that battle cry! Awesome!
Ash is now inspired for KOF 11 :)
- The Orochi, knowing full well his life wasn’t worth repeating history, would choose death over the Momentum, but Elisabeth strongly suspected it wouldn’t come to that.
- Or at least she hoped that.
So that's why Hydra focused on Chris. And- yikes, Orochi Iori on the loose!
I cannot wait for the epic conclusion! Go, Geese! And Bison! Where are you?
Holy shit. Athena just knocked out everyone unworthy. Hell, even almighty Geese felt faint!
Wait... did Bison and the others also get knocked out?
... Aw...
- Athena though it odd and yet funny that the man that was in the most danger of being killed here was the one leading the charge. He might have escaped the Psycho Crusher… but Mr. Howard was living on borrowed time.
Never! Geese is now a HERO! And heroes always win- so long as they have courage!
Okay, I just sounded like someone from GaoGaiGar...
- The attacks were fast, the quartet being paralyzed by Iori flames before Kyo’s Orochinagi blasted them back into a wall.
That IS a good combo :)
- “I mean… you get your powers just goddamn handed to you… you never worked for them at all… being disciplined for years and years! How the hell do you think that feels like… training for your whole goddamn life and merely being a few steps ahead of some idiot that was in the right place at the right time!”
Wow. I'd never seen Kyo like this before. Jealous? Angry? A complete asshole with Shingo and Beni? Woah.
- “Kyo, Athena would only do this if it wouldn’t be something you normally would do,” Benimaru slowly said. “Therefor, it requires an amoral and objectionable action. Therefor, we have all the justification to fight you.”
lol Beni's big mouth does the job yet again lol
Shingo amazed me. First the Shingo Kick, then Burning Shingo, and now OROCHINAGI- I yelled aloud at that battle cry! Awesome!
Ash is now inspired for KOF 11 :)
- The Orochi, knowing full well his life wasn’t worth repeating history, would choose death over the Momentum, but Elisabeth strongly suspected it wouldn’t come to that.
- Or at least she hoped that.
So that's why Hydra focused on Chris. And- yikes, Orochi Iori on the loose!
I cannot wait for the epic conclusion! Go, Geese! And Bison! Where are you?
9/11/2007 c53 Sheo Darren
Augh! I keep forgetting to keep up! Bad Sheo! Bad Sheo!
- “You’ll save me, King?”
- “No… this is for leaving my team!”
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. :)
- the three members of the Kyokugenryu Team turning back to see not Takuma there… but the infamous Mr. Karate.
You know, I had just seen Maximum Impact II's alternate costume Mister Karate (Ryo) this weekend. And I was awed. I cannot wait until Ryo takes up the mantle of Mister Karate!
- “Did you see it? I actually beat some people!” Shingo said with shimmering eyes
Spunky kid... but you drew with a girl. lol
- “You think she has powers like Sie?”
- “Possibly… we’ll have to wait before reporting back.”
They know? Apparently, there are even more sides to this conflict than I once thought.
- And there was always the Psycho Crusher… although Iori noticed a strange, bulky man in red with a cap with a skull on it in the audience, crying with what appeared to be a plasma monster, a veteran prosecutor, and a mad scientist.
0_0 Bison? Pyron? Wiley? And... that guy?
That Guy: "Hey!"
- “Well… we just have to keep our eyes and ears open then, right?” Shermie said with a smile before everyone looked at her, confused. “What?”
- “That coming from the woman who shouldn’t be able to see at all?”
Exactly. ^_^
- Meanwhile, the figure of Yuki Kushinida, hiding behind a bench, breathed a sigh of relief. That… had been entirely too close.
YUKI! What are you doing there? Get out! NAO!
- “HOWARD!” screamed that red-clad man, “BEAT THAT COPYRIGHT INFRINGER!”
Listen to this man, Geese!
- He was badass Geese Howard.
Oh, yeah! So you CAN Atami Nage a Psycho Crusher!
*can hear Bison cheer in joy from here*
- YOU WILL NOT BE SO LUCKY AGAINST THE HYDRA! PSYCHO BLACKOUT!
0_0 Psycho Blackout? Is that sort of like... a psychic Shun Goku Satsu?
NO! GEESE!
-... because her goal is to Kill Chris.
... Chris? Oh, this I gotta see!
Augh! I keep forgetting to keep up! Bad Sheo! Bad Sheo!
- “You’ll save me, King?”
- “No… this is for leaving my team!”
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. :)
- the three members of the Kyokugenryu Team turning back to see not Takuma there… but the infamous Mr. Karate.
You know, I had just seen Maximum Impact II's alternate costume Mister Karate (Ryo) this weekend. And I was awed. I cannot wait until Ryo takes up the mantle of Mister Karate!
- “Did you see it? I actually beat some people!” Shingo said with shimmering eyes
Spunky kid... but you drew with a girl. lol
- “You think she has powers like Sie?”
- “Possibly… we’ll have to wait before reporting back.”
They know? Apparently, there are even more sides to this conflict than I once thought.
- And there was always the Psycho Crusher… although Iori noticed a strange, bulky man in red with a cap with a skull on it in the audience, crying with what appeared to be a plasma monster, a veteran prosecutor, and a mad scientist.
0_0 Bison? Pyron? Wiley? And... that guy?
That Guy: "Hey!"
- “Well… we just have to keep our eyes and ears open then, right?” Shermie said with a smile before everyone looked at her, confused. “What?”
- “That coming from the woman who shouldn’t be able to see at all?”
Exactly. ^_^
- Meanwhile, the figure of Yuki Kushinida, hiding behind a bench, breathed a sigh of relief. That… had been entirely too close.
YUKI! What are you doing there? Get out! NAO!
- “HOWARD!” screamed that red-clad man, “BEAT THAT COPYRIGHT INFRINGER!”
Listen to this man, Geese!
- He was badass Geese Howard.
Oh, yeah! So you CAN Atami Nage a Psycho Crusher!
*can hear Bison cheer in joy from here*
- YOU WILL NOT BE SO LUCKY AGAINST THE HYDRA! PSYCHO BLACKOUT!
0_0 Psycho Blackout? Is that sort of like... a psychic Shun Goku Satsu?
NO! GEESE!
-... because her goal is to Kill Chris.
... Chris? Oh, this I gotta see!
9/4/2007 c55 20Beni-kun
Exciting chapter. Kyo loosing his powers and stuff to Shingo. That's weird! Well...I know that happened in the last chapter, but yea.
Anyway, this was great. Keep it up! :)
20Beni-kunExciting chapter. Kyo loosing his powers and stuff to Shingo. That's weird! Well...I know that happened in the last chapter, but yea.
Anyway, this was great. Keep it up! :)
8/15/2007 c54 snake86
I'll wait for conclusion, still your explanation for power move from Kyo to Shingo isn't understandable, after all Kyo wanted to kill Orochi only ( or he was & I manipulated ? )
I'll wait for conclusion, still your explanation for power move from Kyo to Shingo isn't understandable, after all Kyo wanted to kill Orochi only ( or he was & I manipulated ? )
8/14/2007 c53 Peachy
What this story lacks in writing style, it makes up in sheer insane volume of awesome ideas, and I value plot way over pretty. Trying to guess what will get turned around is always fun. Best stuff in the entire section, IMO. Keep up the great work !
What this story lacks in writing style, it makes up in sheer insane volume of awesome ideas, and I value plot way over pretty. Trying to guess what will get turned around is always fun. Best stuff in the entire section, IMO. Keep up the great work !
8/14/2007 c32 Darko
I started reading your story two weeks ago and I have already reached Chapter 34. I really enjoy it, especially since I don't like Terry Bogard one bit. Well, there are a lot of things I would suggest for you to change story-wise, but the bottom line is, this is your fic and you should write what you want. Just two things: 1) chapter 32, fight between Eiji and his former student - "you" and "I" are PRONOUNS, not nouns. 2) Introduction to chapter 33 - your teacher was probably expecting you to use synonyms, not homonyms. No wonder she yells (yelled) at you. (Just joking!) Keep up the good work!
I started reading your story two weeks ago and I have already reached Chapter 34. I really enjoy it, especially since I don't like Terry Bogard one bit. Well, there are a lot of things I would suggest for you to change story-wise, but the bottom line is, this is your fic and you should write what you want. Just two things: 1) chapter 32, fight between Eiji and his former student - "you" and "I" are PRONOUNS, not nouns. 2) Introduction to chapter 33 - your teacher was probably expecting you to use synonyms, not homonyms. No wonder she yells (yelled) at you. (Just joking!) Keep up the good work!
8/6/2007 c53 Beni-kun
heheheh Some nose-breaking stuff there. XD
Cool, dude. Can't wait 'till the next chapter. :D
heheheh Some nose-breaking stuff there. XD
Cool, dude. Can't wait 'till the next chapter. :D
8/4/2007 c53 snake86
good neverless, but something isn't shown .
How Iori & Kyo teamed up with a serpent good without noticing that ? or did they team up & they knew that already for unknown reason ?
good neverless, but something isn't shown .
How Iori & Kyo teamed up with a serpent good without noticing that ? or did they team up & they knew that already for unknown reason ?
8/3/2007 c53 Darth Riven
Nice to see a new chapter. Too bad about things being busy.
In other news, I'm going through KOF MI2, it is so awesome...but the missions are annoying. Though all characters are now unlocked which is what I needed.
Darth Riven
Nice to see a new chapter. Too bad about things being busy.
In other news, I'm going through KOF MI2, it is so awesome...but the missions are annoying. Though all characters are now unlocked which is what I needed.
Darth Riven
7/26/2007 c52 4BlackStarr88
Whoa! Probably your best match yet. In fact, if I was running ESPN, I would dub that and Instant Classic and have it run on ESPN Classic. Very good chapter.
4BlackStarr88Whoa! Probably your best match yet. In fact, if I was running ESPN, I would dub that and Instant Classic and have it run on ESPN Classic. Very good chapter.