for A Single Decision7/17/2007 c52 
12Laharl The Overlord
I'm pretty surprised at how good this story has come along and I practically snickered near the end-ahem. _ XD Can't wait until the end~
12Laharl The OverlordI'm pretty surprised at how good this story has come along and I practically snickered near the end-ahem. _ XD Can't wait until the end~
7/17/2007 c52 70Sheo Darren
Beautiful scene there with Andy and Mai. I actually felt sorry for them.
- Iori had given his gruff farewell before staggering off to his room. Apparently some “idiot” was writing some anime crossover AU webcomic and Asuka from Neon Genesis Evangelion was in it…
- And she just happened to have an outfit that looked exactly like his and wielded a certain magatama-shaped Sacred Treasure as a blunt weapon.
Ooh! What's the address of the webcomic? This I gotta see!
And if I had thought Mai and Andy had a nice moment of warmth, Kyo and Athena are dangerously close to discovering just what their relationship really is. I grinned like an idiot when Athena leaned her back into Kyo, and almost giggled when Kyo reciprocated by hugging her. Aw, such a sweet couple.
- “You wanna stay like this for a bit?”
- “Well, we’ll have to move sometime… like breakfast or a shower or something.”
I had smutty thoughts over the last line. Then I realized I was drooling over two dangerous fighters and decided not to continue the smutty thoughts.
- Wonder if your buddy Sie and my buddy Shingo are fighting the Kyokugen Team yet…
Ah, yes, the Sidekick Team a.k.a. The Friends Or Not Quite Friends Team. :)
Yuri versus Shingo. Wow. This reminds me of the Sakura-Ino fight in the Chuunin finals-
Yuri & Shingo: "SHEO! DON'T COMPARE OUR FIGHT TO A FIGHT FROM NARUTO!"
*BOOM*
Ouch.
- His legs… when he had been bringing his left leg in, hit bashed into his right, throwing off his balance and causing his angle in the air to be adjusted.
Ah hah! The infamous "I messed up my move at the most inopportune time" curse/blessing strikes!
- In short, they hit the ground together.
Ahahahahahahahahaha!
- we declare… Double Elimination!”
And the crowd booed because they wanted more gore. :)
- a name -which he’d taken from an arcade game-
Ken Masters *snickers*
- CRACK!
Liz, you evil evil woman. :)
Utterly loved it! And I simply cannot wait until the answer to "Can you Atami Nage a Psycho Crusher?" comes out! (Game-wise, I think not- but if it is Geese...)
Excellent!
70Sheo DarrenBeautiful scene there with Andy and Mai. I actually felt sorry for them.
- Iori had given his gruff farewell before staggering off to his room. Apparently some “idiot” was writing some anime crossover AU webcomic and Asuka from Neon Genesis Evangelion was in it…
- And she just happened to have an outfit that looked exactly like his and wielded a certain magatama-shaped Sacred Treasure as a blunt weapon.
Ooh! What's the address of the webcomic? This I gotta see!
And if I had thought Mai and Andy had a nice moment of warmth, Kyo and Athena are dangerously close to discovering just what their relationship really is. I grinned like an idiot when Athena leaned her back into Kyo, and almost giggled when Kyo reciprocated by hugging her. Aw, such a sweet couple.
- “You wanna stay like this for a bit?”
- “Well, we’ll have to move sometime… like breakfast or a shower or something.”
I had smutty thoughts over the last line. Then I realized I was drooling over two dangerous fighters and decided not to continue the smutty thoughts.
- Wonder if your buddy Sie and my buddy Shingo are fighting the Kyokugen Team yet…
Ah, yes, the Sidekick Team a.k.a. The Friends Or Not Quite Friends Team. :)
Yuri versus Shingo. Wow. This reminds me of the Sakura-Ino fight in the Chuunin finals-
Yuri & Shingo: "SHEO! DON'T COMPARE OUR FIGHT TO A FIGHT FROM NARUTO!"
*BOOM*
Ouch.
- His legs… when he had been bringing his left leg in, hit bashed into his right, throwing off his balance and causing his angle in the air to be adjusted.
Ah hah! The infamous "I messed up my move at the most inopportune time" curse/blessing strikes!
- In short, they hit the ground together.
Ahahahahahahahahaha!
- we declare… Double Elimination!”
And the crowd booed because they wanted more gore. :)
- a name -which he’d taken from an arcade game-
Ken Masters *snickers*
- CRACK!
Liz, you evil evil woman. :)
Utterly loved it! And I simply cannot wait until the answer to "Can you Atami Nage a Psycho Crusher?" comes out! (Game-wise, I think not- but if it is Geese...)
Excellent!
7/12/2007 c52 snake86
for some reason I feel it was very short in compare to usual chapters, maybe it wasn't full with actions rhis chapter
for some reason I feel it was very short in compare to usual chapters, maybe it wasn't full with actions rhis chapter
7/2/2007 c51 snake86
Great Story as usual , sorry for my late review, but I was more than busy in real life .
I'm waiting for the next part again
Great Story as usual , sorry for my late review, but I was more than busy in real life .
I'm waiting for the next part again
6/17/2007 c51 20Beni-kun
Awesome fight between Beni and Clark. X3 I love how Beni states that he's gonna use the money for his medical bills. lol
heheheh Now I know what you meant at the first of the fic. XD And I thought it was gonna turn into a yuri type of thing. D: Though, I didn't think too much of it 'cause I did put in the yaoi hints in my fic that you read. XD
But Mature doesn't think the same way as Vice does. lol
20Beni-kunAwesome fight between Beni and Clark. X3 I love how Beni states that he's gonna use the money for his medical bills. lol
heheheh Now I know what you meant at the first of the fic. XD And I thought it was gonna turn into a yuri type of thing. D: Though, I didn't think too much of it 'cause I did put in the yaoi hints in my fic that you read. XD
But Mature doesn't think the same way as Vice does. lol
6/17/2007 c51 70Sheo Darren
I have to admit, the battle scenes, while good, were simply eclipsed by the plot points and resolutions of character/relationship issues throughout the chapter. Benimaru's "revenge" on Clark. Elizabeth's planning. And...
- Mature… Emily… had loved her?
Oh, wow.
- On the other hand, she felt as if there was one less problem in her world now.
Well, can't win them all. But at least it's off her chest now. Figuratively speaking.
- “Oh… yeah,” Yuki answered, nodding honestly. “But two of my best friends are here so I thought I’d take a look. I assure you, I’m perfectly fine now.”
- “She’s here.”
- She’s here… Athena heard a voice say. You know you have to kill her.
All bets now go out the window as all Hell prepares to break loose. Kyo! Who will you fight for? Your old love, or your new love?
Kyo: "Shut up, Sheo!"
Omake! Yay!
- Goro suddenly looked down, Jubei having rolled up Goro’s pants a little bit to reveal a tape player and a large speaker system, all hidden under the baggy pants.
So THAT'S how he blows stuff up.
The brightest, shiniest moment of this fic is undeniably provided by Elizabeth- whom I will now affectionately dub "Liz" for these stellar lines:
- I’ve put Chris under lock and key for safekeeping. When all Hell breaks loose, we throw him into the mix and hope for the best.”
- “THAT’S the plan?” Ash asked, turning to her in shock. “Isn’t that a little… risky?”
- “Hey, when there’s a fire in an oil field, you blow it out with nitro,” Elisabeth countered. “We drag Mukai and the other Past Coming People out here and we blow them away, one, two, three. Between the infighting between all the superpowers, most will be disposed of, and those that remain are exhausted. In a nutshell, everybody saved and onigiri to all knowing parties.”
- “Jeez… some mastermind you are.”
- “You make due, Ash.”
Brilliant, Liz! Yet, admittedly, not as entertaining as...
- “It’s Just not Fair!”
lol Don't cry, Raoul Julia. I recently gave you your own "tribute" fic where you kick ass after taking over SNK.
- “But that’s not important! You think Demitri’s got it bad? That guy’s a total wimp! Only reason I lost to him was that I was too busy gawking at his manly che- I mean, Morrigan’s breasts!”
*I slowly inch away as well*
- “Manfred…” Pyron started to say.
- “Von Karma?” Bison finished. Manfred nodded.
No wonder he lost. What with a last name like that...
- “But you’re not even the final boss of Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney!”
- “I WAS BEFORE THE WHOLE DS REMAKE!”
*shakes head*
- “Doctor,” Pyron started to say, but Manfred cut him off.
- “Willy?”
-“WILY! WILY, YOU IDIOTS!”
So true... lol
Great update!
70Sheo DarrenI have to admit, the battle scenes, while good, were simply eclipsed by the plot points and resolutions of character/relationship issues throughout the chapter. Benimaru's "revenge" on Clark. Elizabeth's planning. And...
- Mature… Emily… had loved her?
Oh, wow.
- On the other hand, she felt as if there was one less problem in her world now.
Well, can't win them all. But at least it's off her chest now. Figuratively speaking.
- “Oh… yeah,” Yuki answered, nodding honestly. “But two of my best friends are here so I thought I’d take a look. I assure you, I’m perfectly fine now.”
- “She’s here.”
- She’s here… Athena heard a voice say. You know you have to kill her.
All bets now go out the window as all Hell prepares to break loose. Kyo! Who will you fight for? Your old love, or your new love?
Kyo: "Shut up, Sheo!"
Omake! Yay!
- Goro suddenly looked down, Jubei having rolled up Goro’s pants a little bit to reveal a tape player and a large speaker system, all hidden under the baggy pants.
So THAT'S how he blows stuff up.
The brightest, shiniest moment of this fic is undeniably provided by Elizabeth- whom I will now affectionately dub "Liz" for these stellar lines:
- I’ve put Chris under lock and key for safekeeping. When all Hell breaks loose, we throw him into the mix and hope for the best.”
- “THAT’S the plan?” Ash asked, turning to her in shock. “Isn’t that a little… risky?”
- “Hey, when there’s a fire in an oil field, you blow it out with nitro,” Elisabeth countered. “We drag Mukai and the other Past Coming People out here and we blow them away, one, two, three. Between the infighting between all the superpowers, most will be disposed of, and those that remain are exhausted. In a nutshell, everybody saved and onigiri to all knowing parties.”
- “Jeez… some mastermind you are.”
- “You make due, Ash.”
Brilliant, Liz! Yet, admittedly, not as entertaining as...
- “It’s Just not Fair!”
lol Don't cry, Raoul Julia. I recently gave you your own "tribute" fic where you kick ass after taking over SNK.
- “But that’s not important! You think Demitri’s got it bad? That guy’s a total wimp! Only reason I lost to him was that I was too busy gawking at his manly che- I mean, Morrigan’s breasts!”
*I slowly inch away as well*
- “Manfred…” Pyron started to say.
- “Von Karma?” Bison finished. Manfred nodded.
No wonder he lost. What with a last name like that...
- “But you’re not even the final boss of Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney!”
- “I WAS BEFORE THE WHOLE DS REMAKE!”
*shakes head*
- “Doctor,” Pyron started to say, but Manfred cut him off.
- “Willy?”
-“WILY! WILY, YOU IDIOTS!”
So true... lol
Great update!
6/7/2007 c50 Sheo Darren
Welcome back, indeed! And what a comeback you've sprung on us!
- With any luck, Kim can denounce the overcharged prices as ‘evil’ and we can get a hundred bucks of store credit
Is that all Kim has become? The walking discount card? Still, it's convenient to have him around. ^_^
- “RYO! YOU’RE NO SON OF MINE!
- “KYOKUGEN IS ‘EXTREME KARATE’, NOT WIMP-OUT KARATE!”
Yes, it is old man pride driving Takuma. Which is why-
- “SURPISE ROSE!” King’s feet smashed into Takuma’s head,
lol I didn't know King was the type to attack out of nowhere.
- “NO SMOKING!”
Someone has watched the Keanu Reeves "Constantine" film. ^_^
But the most stupendous and shocking scene is, hands down:
- “PSYCHO CRUSHER!”
Oh, my Ayanami Rei. Athena has Psycho Crusher.
M. Bison: "... Well... this seems to be heading somewhere interesting..."
Bison, go back to the new SF fic I made for you.
- Awakened Hydra.
0_0 Of course. It makes sense. The Hydra's a Greek critter, and Athena's name and goddess powers are self-explanatory.
M. Bison: "I guess you didn't see that, now, did you?"
Mr. Raoul Julia, much as I respect your accomplishments, you are starting to get on my nerves.
An excellent update, LSN-san! Once more I bow down to you!
Welcome back, indeed! And what a comeback you've sprung on us!
- With any luck, Kim can denounce the overcharged prices as ‘evil’ and we can get a hundred bucks of store credit
Is that all Kim has become? The walking discount card? Still, it's convenient to have him around. ^_^
- “RYO! YOU’RE NO SON OF MINE!
- “KYOKUGEN IS ‘EXTREME KARATE’, NOT WIMP-OUT KARATE!”
Yes, it is old man pride driving Takuma. Which is why-
- “SURPISE ROSE!” King’s feet smashed into Takuma’s head,
lol I didn't know King was the type to attack out of nowhere.
- “NO SMOKING!”
Someone has watched the Keanu Reeves "Constantine" film. ^_^
But the most stupendous and shocking scene is, hands down:
- “PSYCHO CRUSHER!”
Oh, my Ayanami Rei. Athena has Psycho Crusher.
M. Bison: "... Well... this seems to be heading somewhere interesting..."
Bison, go back to the new SF fic I made for you.
- Awakened Hydra.
0_0 Of course. It makes sense. The Hydra's a Greek critter, and Athena's name and goddess powers are self-explanatory.
M. Bison: "I guess you didn't see that, now, did you?"
Mr. Raoul Julia, much as I respect your accomplishments, you are starting to get on my nerves.
An excellent update, LSN-san! Once more I bow down to you!
6/7/2007 c50 20Beni-kun
heheheh Good job, Billy.
Andy's gonna be stronger? Whoa.
Well, can't wait 'till the next chapter! :3
20Beni-kunheheheh Good job, Billy.
Andy's gonna be stronger? Whoa.
Well, can't wait 'till the next chapter! :3
6/7/2007 c49 Beni-kun
Wow, been a long time since I reviewed this. .
Anyway, this was just awesome. Beni did good 'till Eiji came behind him. XD
heheheh A surgeon that does wonders. lol Poor Ash. X3
Wow, been a long time since I reviewed this. .
Anyway, this was just awesome. Beni did good 'till Eiji came behind him. XD
heheheh A surgeon that does wonders. lol Poor Ash. X3
6/6/2007 c50 Evan Jones
Man, i missed Eiji! Of all of your characters, he and i are most alike in personality.
Nice move, Athena. But not as nice as Dan Hibiki's SAIKYO CRUSHA!
Welcome back. I hope you enjoyed your vacation, because now you have to deal with our incessant nagging for future updates again!
Man, i missed Eiji! Of all of your characters, he and i are most alike in personality.
Nice move, Athena. But not as nice as Dan Hibiki's SAIKYO CRUSHA!
Welcome back. I hope you enjoyed your vacation, because now you have to deal with our incessant nagging for future updates again!
6/5/2007 c50 snake86
Good long waited story, not predictable ( good thing )
You had better before, but it is still very good .
Good long waited story, not predictable ( good thing )
You had better before, but it is still very good .
6/4/2007 c50 Darth Riven
Nice chapter! Keep it up!
Psycho Crusher anyone?
Darth Riven
Nice chapter! Keep it up!
Psycho Crusher anyone?
Darth Riven
6/4/2007 c50 7NewEnclave
ATHENA JUST USED M. BISON'S STRONGEST MOVE? WTF? On a lighter note, let me guess, she's Hydra, isn't she?
7NewEnclaveATHENA JUST USED M. BISON'S STRONGEST MOVE? WTF? On a lighter note, let me guess, she's Hydra, isn't she?
5/1/2007 c49 4BlackStarr88
Ha, it was neat seeing Shingo pull off the upset... then lose faster than a blink of the eye. And looks like Mr. Millenium Breaker needs to step his game up, instead of playing that SFA3. All Eyes On Athena huh, sensing a possible Tupac theme?(lol!) Sorry I didn't review earlier.
4BlackStarr88Ha, it was neat seeing Shingo pull off the upset... then lose faster than a blink of the eye. And looks like Mr. Millenium Breaker needs to step his game up, instead of playing that SFA3. All Eyes On Athena huh, sensing a possible Tupac theme?(lol!) Sorry I didn't review earlier.
5/1/2007 c48 BlackStarr88
"Ah screw it, you're not even number two in Japan," nice way to put it. Dman Mai was on some other shit, but I knoiw you have a thing for torturing her. So how was DC?
"Ah screw it, you're not even number two in Japan," nice way to put it. Dman Mai was on some other shit, but I knoiw you have a thing for torturing her. So how was DC?