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3/30/2012 c1 Ranmaleopard
interesting please continue!
6/17/2007 c1 FalseExact
this would be a great story if it was finished, but I enjoyed what was written so far
8/11/2006 c1 0K0
this is a great fic its too bad its abandonded
8/2/2006 c1 ranma-chan-14
plz update soon, this is a really good fic ^_^
4/13/2006 c1 Kou
Are you a native English speaker? Your story was very fragmentary and I could not follow the character motivations. For instance, why would a Sith Lord care about some girl? Why would the Queen immediately give a total stranger that appeared in her throne room a job?

What does Ranma care if Ryoga screws Akane if he hates her enough to make him fall to the dark side?

This was like some rambling stream of consciousness thing.
1/26/2006 c1 1Bobboky
cool
1/24/2006 c1 Unoviento
good idea...

nice settings..

original...

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I know i have no real bases to critizice your work, i´ve just written a fic, incomplete and unposted.. but anyway i have a suggestion. When Pluto is telling their story to the Senshi, Haruka asks something. I don`t think it`s a valid question sounds too forced, maybe you can try to find another way to explain that. See ya and i hope to read from you soon

Unov

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