
8/13/2003 c1
1crystalgem2003
oh my god, that was great! but why did you kill her? i mean, DUO JUST PROPOSED LAST NIGHT! she can't just DIE on him all of a sudden! duo would be heart-broken, depressed, suicidal, etc. etc. you absolutely HAVE to have usagi make a miraculous comeback! write a new chapter and have somebody rescue her or something! PLEASE, i'm begging you! don't leave usagi just DEAD there! ugh...anyways! great story! this strikes me as something you wrote when you were on a sugar/caffeine-high, but it's still really good! only a few minor problems with grammar and that junk. congrats!
~-~crystal

oh my god, that was great! but why did you kill her? i mean, DUO JUST PROPOSED LAST NIGHT! she can't just DIE on him all of a sudden! duo would be heart-broken, depressed, suicidal, etc. etc. you absolutely HAVE to have usagi make a miraculous comeback! write a new chapter and have somebody rescue her or something! PLEASE, i'm begging you! don't leave usagi just DEAD there! ugh...anyways! great story! this strikes me as something you wrote when you were on a sugar/caffeine-high, but it's still really good! only a few minor problems with grammar and that junk. congrats!
~-~crystal
10/12/2001 c1 ghettogirl
that was SWEET! but did u really have ta kill her.
that was SWEET! but did u really have ta kill her.
6/12/2001 c1 Lady Darkness
! YOU CAN'T LEAVE MY SISTER DIEING! (i'M DARKNESS SHE'S LIGHT!) ! EVEN THOUGH I DON'T AGREE ON MOST OF THE STUFF SHE SAYS. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... MEANY! OH, WELL. :( PLEASE MAKE A NOTHER CHAP.! SHE SHOULD LIVE!
! YOU CAN'T LEAVE MY SISTER DIEING! (i'M DARKNESS SHE'S LIGHT!) ! EVEN THOUGH I DON'T AGREE ON MOST OF THE STUFF SHE SAYS. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... MEANY! OH, WELL. :( PLEASE MAKE A NOTHER CHAP.! SHE SHOULD LIVE!
5/18/2001 c1 Becks
Hey, I finally found after weeks of internet loss! Anyway I love it,I love it,I love it,I love it,I love it, but I must agree that the paragraph you were saying about really is in need of a little TLC. Ciao.
Hey, I finally found after weeks of internet loss! Anyway I love it,I love it,I love it,I love it,I love it, but I must agree that the paragraph you were saying about really is in need of a little TLC. Ciao.
5/8/2001 c1 Tora Tigress
sad in the end,but cool
sad in the end,but cool
5/8/2001 c1
19Anime Princess
Owch, poor Usagi! Why'd she have to die! I hope the guys don't mourn to badly! POST MORE ASAP! I LOVE IT!
Love ya,
Sam

Owch, poor Usagi! Why'd she have to die! I hope the guys don't mourn to badly! POST MORE ASAP! I LOVE IT!
Love ya,
Sam
5/8/2001 c1 SSJ4 Sailor Menz too lazy to sign in
*shakes head* Minna minna minna. This is only a short story. Not a multi-parter. Gomen minna-chan but that's how it's gonna stay. Arigato for the wonderful reviews! ^_^ You really made my day with them! Ciao!
*shakes head* Minna minna minna. This is only a short story. Not a multi-parter. Gomen minna-chan but that's how it's gonna stay. Arigato for the wonderful reviews! ^_^ You really made my day with them! Ciao!
5/7/2001 c1 alexz
it was good!
it was good!
5/7/2001 c1 Dominion Dragon Too lazy to sign in
It's a good story but i'll have to take one of those tickets since Usagi died, you know what go around comes around!
It's a good story but i'll have to take one of those tickets since Usagi died, you know what go around comes around!
5/7/2001 c1 Dragon
I loved it ...well except for Usagi dying...but I'm sure she'll be reborn somewhere else...wooho with the Heero/Duo situation...make Duo on bottom...he's such a wild boy...he'll tame Heero quick enough I'm sure...Ja ne
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I loved it ...well except for Usagi dying...but I'm sure she'll be reborn somewhere else...wooho with the Heero/Duo situation...make Duo on bottom...he's such a wild boy...he'll tame Heero quick enough I'm sure...Ja ne
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5/7/2001 c1
20Tenshi no Nozomi
Kuso... you killed her again, oneechan! You just seem to have a thing with killing her...

Kuso... you killed her again, oneechan! You just seem to have a thing with killing her...
5/7/2001 c1 luckydragoness
please continue! Very interesting hurry up and continue!
please continue! Very interesting hurry up and continue!
5/7/2001 c1 GoldenGoddess leave me alone I don't wanna sign in
Wow, that was pretty good. You did a great job. I can't wait for your next story.
Ja ne.
Wow, that was pretty good. You did a great job. I can't wait for your next story.
Ja ne.