for That Fateful Summer3/1/2015 c6 Guest
Terrible. Just terrible.
Terrible. Just terrible.
9/28/2013 c36 Herbstkind
This was an exceptionally good and beautifully written fic! I found myself well entertaines and read through the night. Can't wait to start part II and find out about Hermiones myterious illness. So again: loved it!
This was an exceptionally good and beautifully written fic! I found myself well entertaines and read through the night. Can't wait to start part II and find out about Hermiones myterious illness. So again: loved it!
11/24/2011 c10 
1Romantic Journalist
I like the idea of your story, but it's hard for me to read it through without proper character analysis and grammar use.
1Romantic JournalistI like the idea of your story, but it's hard for me to read it through without proper character analysis and grammar use.
10/9/2011 c36 13mskairijade
Quite enthralling. I am off to check the sequel *crosses fingers and hopes its actually finished unlike so many others * I am most interested i learning what Narcissa is slipping to her to make her ill as well as whyand who is the man in the black cloak?
13mskairijadeQuite enthralling. I am off to check the sequel *crosses fingers and hopes its actually finished unlike so many others * I am most interested i learning what Narcissa is slipping to her to make her ill as well as whyand who is the man in the black cloak?
10/9/2011 c36 mskairijade
Quite enthralling. I am off to check the sequel *crosses fingers and hopes its actually finished unlike so many others * I am most interested i learning what Narcissa is slipping to her to make her ill as well as whyand who is the man in the black cloak?
Quite enthralling. I am off to check the sequel *crosses fingers and hopes its actually finished unlike so many others * I am most interested i learning what Narcissa is slipping to her to make her ill as well as whyand who is the man in the black cloak?
8/1/2011 c36 3youcan'tandwillnevercontrolme
I loved readin this story x cant wait to read the sequel xxxxxx
3youcan'tandwillnevercontrolmeI loved readin this story x cant wait to read the sequel xxxxxx
6/20/2011 c36 tresbien
I really liked this story. But, you really need to know the differences between 'Your'-'You're','Here'-'Hear','Were'-'Where'-'Wear' & etc.
I really liked this story. But, you really need to know the differences between 'Your'-'You're','Here'-'Hear','Were'-'Where'-'Wear' & etc.
1/4/2011 c2 slytherinprincess02
I have a feeling that I am digging far too deep in this, but my guess is that the girl is hermione. Her first initial is H and the L. Ion means lion, insinuating she is a Gryffindor, but I am probably wrong
I have a feeling that I am digging far too deep in this, but my guess is that the girl is hermione. Her first initial is H and the L. Ion means lion, insinuating she is a Gryffindor, but I am probably wrong
5/18/2010 c15 14meenajon
You have quite a good story here, but I would suggest that you take on the services of a beta. There are quite a few mistakes that are simply edited. Examples include: effect vs. affect; too vs. too; etc.
Off I go again.
14meenajonYou have quite a good story here, but I would suggest that you take on the services of a beta. There are quite a few mistakes that are simply edited. Examples include: effect vs. affect; too vs. too; etc.
Off I go again.