
8/19/2006 c2 Sarah
Great Story
You Should really finish it
Great Story
You Should really finish it
3/11/2006 c2
3forgetMEalways
awsome sotry update and along with that update bring a happy ending would ya?

awsome sotry update and along with that update bring a happy ending would ya?
2/23/2006 c2 Bluephoenix70
The dialogue is a little hard to follow. It mght be easier if you put it in quotes or script form. I like this story, and I hope that you will continue it. :-)
The dialogue is a little hard to follow. It mght be easier if you put it in quotes or script form. I like this story, and I hope that you will continue it. :-)
2/14/2006 c2 jennifer
i really like this story, i hope to see the next chapter soon, i can't wait to see what's gonna hapen.
i really like this story, i hope to see the next chapter soon, i can't wait to see what's gonna hapen.
2/8/2006 c2 soapmama
I like it alot so far, please continue, update soon!
I like it alot so far, please continue, update soon!
2/8/2006 c2 Jessi
please continue and dont take yrs to do it like you did with this chapter.
please continue and dont take yrs to do it like you did with this chapter.
2/1/2006 c1
1taradactyl
Oh!
Who is this mysterious caller?
Dun dun dun~
I hope you update soon!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :D

Oh!
Who is this mysterious caller?
Dun dun dun~
I hope you update soon!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :D
1/28/2006 c1 Jessi
Please update soon I cant waite!
Please update soon I cant waite!