
5/28/2010 c1
26Desslock3
Being a big fan of Robotech/Macross myself I am slightly saddened that it took me this long to discover your fic here. However, I think you do a very good job of capture some of the tension between Rick and Lisa, and even some of the internal conflict within Rick as to whether or not Minmei is the girl for him (which don't beliive she is, but to be fair I did marry a girl named Lisa). I would like to see you expand this and have more interaction between Rick and Lisa as they continue to make that transition from friend to lover.

Being a big fan of Robotech/Macross myself I am slightly saddened that it took me this long to discover your fic here. However, I think you do a very good job of capture some of the tension between Rick and Lisa, and even some of the internal conflict within Rick as to whether or not Minmei is the girl for him (which don't beliive she is, but to be fair I did marry a girl named Lisa). I would like to see you expand this and have more interaction between Rick and Lisa as they continue to make that transition from friend to lover.
2/4/2009 c1 keemew2
Awe! That is soo cute Sith! Her anda kitten. I liked the one shot, it was nicley done and well written. The scene was straight on, very in character.
Kudos!
Awe! That is soo cute Sith! Her anda kitten. I liked the one shot, it was nicley done and well written. The scene was straight on, very in character.
Kudos!
2/12/2008 c1 Lunacharm
Such a cute story. I have often wondered what Rick must have thought when Lisa gave him those photographs of her. I am glad to see someone else wondered about that too. :)
Such a cute story. I have often wondered what Rick must have thought when Lisa gave him those photographs of her. I am glad to see someone else wondered about that too. :)
11/10/2007 c1 70d01ddd58xx
I am pretty clueless on the world of macross and robotech. That said, I'm quite impressed with how you merge the technical, military scene and setting (even with little gestures like putting an envelope in the front pocket of a flight suit) with very natural and engaging human interactions through dialog and body gestures. I'm thinking, wow, this person knows what it's like to be in a place like this (I'm reading into your "tour of duty" line)-even in a made-up, scifi fictional world, your writing comes across as authentic.
I am pretty clueless on the world of macross and robotech. That said, I'm quite impressed with how you merge the technical, military scene and setting (even with little gestures like putting an envelope in the front pocket of a flight suit) with very natural and engaging human interactions through dialog and body gestures. I'm thinking, wow, this person knows what it's like to be in a place like this (I'm reading into your "tour of duty" line)-even in a made-up, scifi fictional world, your writing comes across as authentic.
7/13/2006 c1
19Sithking Zero
So... The Sithking meets the Sithknight... interesting...
I like this story a lot! please add more chapters!

So... The Sithking meets the Sithknight... interesting...
I like this story a lot! please add more chapters!
4/17/2006 c1
8MsHayes
Why? oh, why is Rick so clueless? I want to strangle him! And Lisa...
Nice fic! Any other chapters coming up?

Why? oh, why is Rick so clueless? I want to strangle him! And Lisa...
Nice fic! Any other chapters coming up?
2/21/2006 c1
5Adena McGee
oh it was so close... Rick must have been really tired to not have a reaction about those photos... I would have thought a "what the..." coming from him. After all, Rick is very tempestuous, very clueless and very confused about women behavior, especially Lisa's.
What I meant by the so close statement is that you were building towards something and you didn't pay it off at the end. Or maybe you did, I mean we all have our own opinions of Rick so maybe to you he reacts in a different way.
Anyway my two cents are all in now.

oh it was so close... Rick must have been really tired to not have a reaction about those photos... I would have thought a "what the..." coming from him. After all, Rick is very tempestuous, very clueless and very confused about women behavior, especially Lisa's.
What I meant by the so close statement is that you were building towards something and you didn't pay it off at the end. Or maybe you did, I mean we all have our own opinions of Rick so maybe to you he reacts in a different way.
Anyway my two cents are all in now.
2/15/2006 c1
7LisaVang
Nicely done... quick and refreshing. I like it. It's good to see you writing again.

Nicely done... quick and refreshing. I like it. It's good to see you writing again.