for Sickness of Heart9/11/2022 c1 Kubra
Başı kısımları Japonca oldukları için anlamadım,lütfen sadece ingilizce yarın ve Fugaku Itachi'ye böyle teşekkür etmez çünkü o daha büyük.
Başı kısımları Japonca oldukları için anlamadım,lütfen sadece ingilizce yarın ve Fugaku Itachi'ye böyle teşekkür etmez çünkü o daha büyük.
12/23/2015 c1 Anonymous
Kawaii!
Kawaii!
12/12/2014 c1 Guest
Kawiii i love it
Kawiii i love it
4/4/2014 c1 Ciara
I thought it was really sweet and I actually liked having some of the Japanese words in there, It wasn't long at all. Will you be making more please say yes please. I loved it 3 :) XD
I thought it was really sweet and I actually liked having some of the Japanese words in there, It wasn't long at all. Will you be making more please say yes please. I loved it 3 :) XD
3/4/2014 c1 
7LittleLunaChan
Idk if you still read the reviews since it's been a while since you posted this but a little tip; don't throw in random Japanese. While almost all anime and manga fans know some basic words/phrases it doesn't mean they know the ones you're using. It's also a little off throwing since you mentalle have to switch from English to Japanese and that messes a little with the flow of the story. I also recommend looking for a beta, there are some grammar mistakes or typo's that could easily be avoided :) Please don't take it the wrong way, it's a cute story but there are some points that need a little work :)
7LittleLunaChanIdk if you still read the reviews since it's been a while since you posted this but a little tip; don't throw in random Japanese. While almost all anime and manga fans know some basic words/phrases it doesn't mean they know the ones you're using. It's also a little off throwing since you mentalle have to switch from English to Japanese and that messes a little with the flow of the story. I also recommend looking for a beta, there are some grammar mistakes or typo's that could easily be avoided :) Please don't take it the wrong way, it's a cute story but there are some points that need a little work :)
9/4/2013 c1 16WinterSpirit13
I may be learning Japanese, but I don't know everything in here... Eh, I get what it means, and I love the story
16WinterSpirit13I may be learning Japanese, but I don't know everything in here... Eh, I get what it means, and I love the story
1/19/2008 c1 2KITNARUKUN234
aw kawai
just wondering, what do:
Uieto Korede
Naze
Arigatou Gozaimasu
Daisuki
and Aikou mean?
loved the story, i thought it was so kawai!
2KITNARUKUN234aw kawai
just wondering, what do:
Uieto Korede
Naze
Arigatou Gozaimasu
Daisuki
and Aikou mean?
loved the story, i thought it was so kawai!
9/4/2007 c1 7ChaoticThotXOXO
that was so cute. itachi spoke so many lies. i thought that it was a very nice fanfic. good job.
i would like the translations becuase my japanese is lacking.
thanx
7ChaoticThotXOXOthat was so cute. itachi spoke so many lies. i thought that it was a very nice fanfic. good job.
i would like the translations becuase my japanese is lacking.
thanx
7/31/2007 c1 4K94evur
awh.
kawaii sasuke itachi fluff...
arigato for a great read :3
the ending wuz just to kawaii for wordz...X3
4K94evurawh.
kawaii sasuke itachi fluff...
arigato for a great read :3
the ending wuz just to kawaii for wordz...X3
9/1/2006 c1 25Olive'sBadDreams
UCHIHACESTNESS... O.O
You're writing pwns... Nica-chan! *ish jealousness*
=D Thanks for the review!
*huggles to death and gives you a cookie*
3
25Olive'sBadDreamsUCHIHACESTNESS... O.O
You're writing pwns... Nica-chan! *ish jealousness*
=D Thanks for the review!
*huggles to death and gives you a cookie*
3
8/22/2006 c1 8Platinum Egoiste
There's a tiny bit of problem with the past/present tenses but the fluff is good.
Cute!
8Platinum EgoisteThere's a tiny bit of problem with the past/present tenses but the fluff is good.
Cute!
7/10/2006 c1 3what the vell
I usually don't read oneshot fluff but I'm glad I read your. I think I'm going to read fluff story now! thanks alot! if you ever need help with a story cause of writer block. I'll be more then help with my "youthful spirt"quote from rocklee
helpful baka at FF,
~what the vell (WTV)
3what the vellI usually don't read oneshot fluff but I'm glad I read your. I think I'm going to read fluff story now! thanks alot! if you ever need help with a story cause of writer block. I'll be more then help with my "youthful spirt"quote from rocklee
helpful baka at FF,
~what the vell (WTV)