for Windborne9/14/2019 c6 
2Death of Snipers
Definitely a good chapter. Seeing your skilled details being applied to a fight as well as clothes was nice, and the transitions of Konatsu and Kodachi were well done
The last interaction seemed odd to me. It’s one thing for Kasumi to want to escape from her housekeeper role, it’s another for her to disregard her own sisters name
Similarly, for all of ranma’s growth, it’s odd she still has so little say in comparison to her mom, even as she grows into her role
2Death of SnipersDefinitely a good chapter. Seeing your skilled details being applied to a fight as well as clothes was nice, and the transitions of Konatsu and Kodachi were well done
The last interaction seemed odd to me. It’s one thing for Kasumi to want to escape from her housekeeper role, it’s another for her to disregard her own sisters name
Similarly, for all of ranma’s growth, it’s odd she still has so little say in comparison to her mom, even as she grows into her role
9/14/2019 c5 Death of Snipers
Liking that the plot is growing, and the insidious nature of what I assume is a disguised puck is really well done. It’s interesting seeing ranma’s desire both grow and be shunted, though I hope some level of that starts to resolve as time goes on. Also it might be nice to see how the senshi are reacting to ami becoming Faylike
Liking that the plot is growing, and the insidious nature of what I assume is a disguised puck is really well done. It’s interesting seeing ranma’s desire both grow and be shunted, though I hope some level of that starts to resolve as time goes on. Also it might be nice to see how the senshi are reacting to ami becoming Faylike
9/14/2019 c3 Death of Snipers
I’m torn. On the one hand, the struggle for ranma’s Identity is an interesting plot point
On the other hand, the fact that she never tells the Senshi fully WHY she claims not to like what happening despite her appearances, sort of detracts from it
That and I’d like to get a little more detail in future monster bartles
I’m torn. On the one hand, the struggle for ranma’s Identity is an interesting plot point
On the other hand, the fact that she never tells the Senshi fully WHY she claims not to like what happening despite her appearances, sort of detracts from it
That and I’d like to get a little more detail in future monster bartles
4/23/2019 c6 26Ozzallos
Getting caught up on your updates. Like the fact ranma is coming into her own concerning her position, better yet, without apology. Feel some of that conflict is missing from those that think she shouldnt, the voices of reason as it were. Akane's the obvious one, tho she feels like the only one. Happy we're finally going somewhere with ami, moar plz :)
26OzzallosGetting caught up on your updates. Like the fact ranma is coming into her own concerning her position, better yet, without apology. Feel some of that conflict is missing from those that think she shouldnt, the voices of reason as it were. Akane's the obvious one, tho she feels like the only one. Happy we're finally going somewhere with ami, moar plz :)
3/27/2019 c2 2Death of Snipers
I wish some more time had been spent to either find ranma a chance to look at other suitors, or get more used to her new state, before the quest was achieved. While I’m still
Liking the story, it feels slightly rushed
2Death of SnipersI wish some more time had been spent to either find ranma a chance to look at other suitors, or get more used to her new state, before the quest was achieved. While I’m still
Liking the story, it feels slightly rushed
3/27/2019 c1 Death of Snipers
Definitely an interesting premise, and I’m looking forward to bingeing what exists, though I’m curious how effective ranma is in battle magic, and how much of her now-meager strength remains when she’s tiny.
So to be clear, is she now 1/4 her cannon strength, or some other amount? And can she still use ki?
Definitely an interesting premise, and I’m looking forward to bingeing what exists, though I’m curious how effective ranma is in battle magic, and how much of her now-meager strength remains when she’s tiny.
So to be clear, is she now 1/4 her cannon strength, or some other amount? And can she still use ki?
3/16/2019 c6 1Lover of Emotions
that is really good but i think that you should switch ranma's possible husband and king to ryoga instead of that airheaded idiot kuno. update soon please.
1Lover of Emotionsthat is really good but i think that you should switch ranma's possible husband and king to ryoga instead of that airheaded idiot kuno. update soon please.
3/16/2019 c5 guest
Ranma's so expletive(?) cute1 LOL XD
Ranma's so expletive(?) cute1 LOL XD
3/15/2019 c6 1DeltaMLP
I'm surprised, but very happy to see this alive again! I hope you keep on writing this!
1DeltaMLPI'm surprised, but very happy to see this alive again! I hope you keep on writing this!
11/20/2018 c5 26Ozzallos
Sometimes you forget how fun a fic like this is if one puts aside their preconcieved notions on what canon should and shouldnt be. Sure, its been a while and not likely to see completion, but thats half of ffnet regardless.
Technically, the writing is excellent and attention to detail superb. How you catalogued so many oufits for ranma is beyond me. Akanes passive-aggressive personality portrayal is one of the highlights, oftimes outshining ranma's IMO. MVP goes to minako. I just loved her reactions.
Still, this fic is appreciated even years down the road.
26OzzallosSometimes you forget how fun a fic like this is if one puts aside their preconcieved notions on what canon should and shouldnt be. Sure, its been a while and not likely to see completion, but thats half of ffnet regardless.
Technically, the writing is excellent and attention to detail superb. How you catalogued so many oufits for ranma is beyond me. Akanes passive-aggressive personality portrayal is one of the highlights, oftimes outshining ranma's IMO. MVP goes to minako. I just loved her reactions.
Still, this fic is appreciated even years down the road.
9/10/2018 c5 Guest
Hope you update this story again, I'm curious to see where the story is going
Hope you update this story again, I'm curious to see where the story is going