for Alanna and Geroge's Wedding6/8/2009 c1 
29Lady Allana Solo
Maybe describe the reception more but otherwise it's good. I'm an A/J fan, but I liked it.
29Lady Allana SoloMaybe describe the reception more but otherwise it's good. I'm an A/J fan, but I liked it.
2/4/2008 c1 romance-addict44
By the way, I'm sure you know this or someones pointed this out but it's George...in your title you spelled it wrong.
By the way, I'm sure you know this or someones pointed this out but it's George...in your title you spelled it wrong.
1/15/2007 c1 10Artemis Hunt
aw! you're very good at writing, and i recommend you keep writing stories! next time try something with a bit less fluff and maybe more chapters to challenge yourself
10Artemis Huntaw! you're very good at writing, and i recommend you keep writing stories! next time try something with a bit less fluff and maybe more chapters to challenge yourself
8/5/2006 c1 13funkyfairygirl
that was really well written, don't know what you were worried about. i loved it so much!
13funkyfairygirlthat was really well written, don't know what you were worried about. i loved it so much!
7/5/2006 c1 8Acelinn
u CHAMPION! A/G fic!
it was really good plz update lolz
"man shes a beauty!" plz plz plz plz UPDATE! I'll be waiting!
^_^ME
8Acelinnu CHAMPION! A/G fic!
it was really good plz update lolz
"man shes a beauty!" plz plz plz plz UPDATE! I'll be waiting!
^_^ME
5/19/2006 c1 bigben
good job just remember to use the same language as the original auther for exsample Gorge- man shes a beaty. I'v never seen her looking as good as she dose now this is way to wordey for gorge he would have gon for something along the lines of thats my lassie ante she grand
good job just remember to use the same language as the original auther for exsample Gorge- man shes a beaty. I'v never seen her looking as good as she dose now this is way to wordey for gorge he would have gon for something along the lines of thats my lassie ante she grand
5/7/2006 c1 1Princess of the Rogues
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! You wrote an Alanna George! Theres too many A/J's they dont even deserve for me to write their whole names! Please send me some links to other Alanna Georges to Do NOT send it to the email on my profile. cya! You're really good!
1Princess of the RoguesTHANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! You wrote an Alanna George! Theres too many A/J's they dont even deserve for me to write their whole names! Please send me some links to other Alanna Georges to Do NOT send it to the email on my profile. cya! You're really good!
3/31/2006 c1 ARosalynnJP
(i love A/G TPs)i...LOVE IT uodate update UPDATE uodate update UPDATE update update UPDATE
i love it
luv ya story,
Sandrymoss101170
(i love A/G TPs)i...LOVE IT uodate update UPDATE uodate update UPDATE update update UPDATE
i love it
luv ya story,
Sandrymoss101170
3/14/2006 c1 4imsomethingcool
its good, u do know how to write.
just one small thing, george probly would be think in words like "man, she's hot" it would probly be something like "God, shes georgous!"
keep them comming!
4imsomethingcoolits good, u do know how to write.
just one small thing, george probly would be think in words like "man, she's hot" it would probly be something like "God, shes georgous!"
keep them comming!
2/11/2006 c1 Kelsoooooo
yey i like tres much! you are good at writing, the storyline is awesome too. write another one!
yey i like tres much! you are good at writing, the storyline is awesome too. write another one!
2/8/2006 c1 9Captain Cheese
Lol this line was made me laugh
Man, she's a beauty
lol. Great story, the dress sound lovly
9Captain CheeseLol this line was made me laugh
Man, she's a beauty
lol. Great story, the dress sound lovly