1/11/2015 c2 60Marla's Lost
Very nice. I liked the way you conveyed the emotion with so few words. There wasn't a lot of extra dialog necessary to *know* how each character felt.

Beautiful story.

Marla

1/10/2015 c1 TL22
I like this. Your writing is almost lyrical. You portray the unspoken emotions between Jackie and Hyde beautifully.

Excellent chapter.

10/14/2006 c2 anonymous
I like it and think you should continue. My only problem is that is was kinda out of character, on Hyde's part. Don't get me wrong, I mean I like Hyde showing his emotions, but i think you could have done it in a more Hyde-like-manner. And I didn't really like how the dialogue was set up, it got confusing at parts, but, maybe thats just me! Over all, I liked it alot! It was cute! =]

10/13/2006 c2 6Casper1990
It's so sweet. It's out of character but it's so sweet that you can't help but frickin love it lol. :)

4/12/2006 c1 32alittlesummerwine
More!

2/1/2006 c1 no name
Yes, PLEASE do continue. I really like it!

2/1/2006 c1 10fisharecoolies
*gasp* his dad? o, i wanna know whats going on so you must continue! great job.

1/31/2006 c1 jackieandsteven4ever
please continue i love it