for Virgin Snow
312/4/2006 c1 Fiyero Oberon
This is good but you need to check your fairy tales. Snow White and Rose Red is not the traditional Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs tale by any means. They are two entirely different stories - they aren't royalty in Snow White and Rose Red, there's no poison apple, the prince is a bear, there's no jealous Queen or magic mirror... make up your mind on which story you're retelling or realize that your tale is Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs just with the addition of Rose Red - don't advertise it as a retelling of Snow White and Rose Red when it's not.
Sorry to be so negative, but it bugs me when people don't get their stories straight. This is good though, I like the style.
This is good but you need to check your fairy tales. Snow White and Rose Red is not the traditional Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs tale by any means. They are two entirely different stories - they aren't royalty in Snow White and Rose Red, there's no poison apple, the prince is a bear, there's no jealous Queen or magic mirror... make up your mind on which story you're retelling or realize that your tale is Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs just with the addition of Rose Red - don't advertise it as a retelling of Snow White and Rose Red when it's not.
Sorry to be so negative, but it bugs me when people don't get their stories straight. This is good though, I like the style.