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3/17/2013 c16 Anonymous
SAVE THEM! Now defy laws again.
3/17/2013 c11 Anonymous
Ms Mows is next.
3/17/2013 c7 Anonymous
Aww.. You could've killed Daisy.
2/13/2012 c12 EPICYOSHI39000
To marioman174:your wrong somepeople like miss mowz aka me cause she`s uneke(check my other reaview down there)
2/13/2012 c12 EPICYOSHI39000
Ok to tell you the truth i like miss mowz mosly cause she uneke(dont now how to spell it)she`s the only mouse in paper mario ttyd who wich was taken out of super paper mario(allonge with koops and the other partners sadly)and she is only in paper mario ttyd and not in other mario games with the other partners and super paper mario only had dumb pixls instad of the uneke characters.why nintendo why ~EPICYOSHI NO ONE MORE EPIC THAN YOSHI
12/28/2010 c16 Yoshinaruto
The ending is similar to "The Final Destination" whare they all die in the end. I am sad Yoshi died. :( Wait, There are millions of Yoshis in the world... :)
12/19/2010 c13 Gloomily Cheerful
Great cliffhanger chapter! When I was reading this and I saw the adds, one of them was for elevator repair and I was just, "WTH?"

Ahem, yes, very good story
12/19/2010 c4 Gloomily Cheerful
Bobbery is falling down, falling down, falling down... Bobbery is falling down, he cut his eye with a razor... (To the tune of "London bridge") Muahahahaha! (In case you can't tell, I enjoy dark musical humor...)

Great story, though! I love all of your works.
1/18/2009 c15 dartz841
Cheesy magazine bit :P Such a slaughterhouse the mall turned out to be
1/18/2009 c16 dartz841
Brutal ending
12/25/2008 c9 dartz841
You calculated the probability of Jolene's death ahppening :/
12/25/2008 c7 dartz841
I've never really liked Yoshi, however I found it ironic that the first time around it was freezing water that brought about his end, and now its boiling water
12/25/2008 c4 dartz841
The song was nicely fit in the death
12/25/2008 c1 dartz841
uh-oh the call reeks of bringing in more trouble than it'll solve
8/22/2008 c16 Sarifina Filth
Well... poo, that Stinks! Death cant tell them their free to go then change it's mind. I shouldnt have read that las t chapter, oh well...
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