7/27/2015 c31 Khalua
What!? No way! You come back years later and finish this! I NEED to know what happens!

1/27/2013 c31 1Megs132
Please finish this story.. I feel depressed without knowing if it's a Noah or a Brooklyn Eve... /3

10/3/2012 c31 Tara Laurel
I was intrigued by your story as I was sifting through older works to satisfy my Four Brothers fix.

I read the comment that you received. It was snide and lacked any backbone or evidence. I have to admit, I was a tad apprehensive as to the possible MarySue element of this story. I was concerned when it began during the timeframe of the movie that it would simply be a rehashing of the film events, with the OC adding some dialogue and drama here and there and then the OC saving Jack, and the day,

Although Maddie did save Jack, which reads as MarySue, there is plenty of other evidence against it.

Bobby liking Maddie could also be taken as a MarySue red alert, but yet, I don't think so. He does what he does out of confusion, not burning love for Maddie. Also, there isn't some big drawn out, dramatic, macho battle of wits, romance and fists between the brothers over her.

Maddie has flaws. Not a trait of a MarySue. You root for her, you yell at her, etc.

Simply by noting the title of this story, one can deduce that it is going to be about this girl. If readers want brothers-centric fiction, then they should read something else and not bash an author for their choice in plot, OC,etc. Yes, there are a lot of OCs in this, but readers can't expect the brothers to just sit at home with each other forever. In real life, we meet new people, new friends, lovers, etc. We should want the characters that we love so much to be happy (even if it is all fiction). Do we want them to be alone forever?

I liked Maddie's backstory. It was sad, but not so over the top to make it cliche for this fandom.

I also liked the amount of flashbacks. Dropping a character in without any prior history leaves a bad taste in my mouth. The progression of getting to know Maddie was done nicely.

Overall, there might be some MarySue moments - especially if you go in looking for them instead of enjoying the story - but I thoroughly enjoyed this. After 4 years of stagnancy, I don't have my hopes up, but

11/1/2010 c6 Y3lloFever
Aww this chapter was so sad.

9/6/2010 c29 1Psycho-Bunny1309
67 Impala. A driver that loves classic rock. Gee, that sounds soooo familiar but I just can't put my finger on it. ^_^ Dean's got some competition, I'm rootin for Jack. He's taller and cuter than Dean, even though Dean does have a super hot younger brother. Love the story, UPDATE! The wait is killing me!

6/15/2009 c11 Me from Sweden
fuck why did she took the bullet? it's destroys everything.

11/18/2008 c31 FourVampires28
First off, this is NOT, i repeat, NOT a flame but how could you leave it at this! It's cruel!