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1inferioridiot
Awww.
Seven years later and this is still one of the best written fanfics for Y!J. Haha guess it's quite passed up eh.
1inferioridiotAwww.
Seven years later and this is still one of the best written fanfics for Y!J. Haha guess it's quite passed up eh.
9/14/2009 c1 5teacupz
the last part is sweet... and the idea is great too, if I have to say! just keep on writting, :)
5teacupzthe last part is sweet... and the idea is great too, if I have to say! just keep on writting, :)
7/1/2009 c1 3aurawind
I totally adore this story! Kawachi x Tsukino is my fav couple, and you make my Kawachi MOAR AWESOME in this oneshot! I hope you could write more fanfictions about this couple!
3aurawindI totally adore this story! Kawachi x Tsukino is my fav couple, and you make my Kawachi MOAR AWESOME in this oneshot! I hope you could write more fanfictions about this couple!
6/12/2009 c1 39Karsten69
Awesome. That could very well have happened. *thumbs up* oh and also *feeds review rabbit* cause you deserve it.
39Karsten69Awesome. That could very well have happened. *thumbs up* oh and also *feeds review rabbit* cause you deserve it.
1/30/2009 c1 15Bite The Dust
AW! I can't decide which is the better couple, KawachiXTsukino, or AzumaXTsukino!
Both are so cute!
Really good story :)
15Bite The DustAW! I can't decide which is the better couple, KawachiXTsukino, or AzumaXTsukino!
Both are so cute!
Really good story :)
11/14/2008 c1 29Astalavisbay
Aw, I absolutely adore this pairing. Too bad there isn't many of those around. I like the whole thing, very interesting.
29AstalavisbayAw, I absolutely adore this pairing. Too bad there isn't many of those around. I like the whole thing, very interesting.
8/23/2008 c1 2sandybeach6th
Aw, so adorable! How sweet, he's working so hard for her. You're a great author!
2sandybeach6thAw, so adorable! How sweet, he's working so hard for her. You're a great author!
5/30/2006 c1 29dementedchris
I've always championed the Kawachi-Tsukino pairing because, as you so eloquently put it, it 'inspires devotion by action,' making it almost noble, almost possible, and still poignantly real. I thought this fic did justice to what Tsukino meant to Kyousuke.
29dementedchrisI've always championed the Kawachi-Tsukino pairing because, as you so eloquently put it, it 'inspires devotion by action,' making it almost noble, almost possible, and still poignantly real. I thought this fic did justice to what Tsukino meant to Kyousuke.
5/17/2006 c1 8Schnozberry
AzumaxTsukino doesn't show up much does it? Neither does KawachixKirisaki's Sister... (sigh) Well everyone has their own opinion!
8SchnozberryAzumaxTsukino doesn't show up much does it? Neither does KawachixKirisaki's Sister... (sigh) Well everyone has their own opinion!
4/23/2006 c1 26PhinalPhantasy
Interesting fanfic. This is the first Yakitake Japan one that I've read. I never thought of Tsukino and Kawachi together until this one, but maybe it CAN work
26PhinalPhantasyInteresting fanfic. This is the first Yakitake Japan one that I've read. I never thought of Tsukino and Kawachi together until this one, but maybe it CAN work
2/12/2006 c1 cantabile21
Hi! i like this! And i've loved the Kawachi-Tsukino pairing since i dunno when, so i really appreciate your work. And i've always felt that poor Kawachi deserves to be taken a bit more seriously, rather than always playing the role of the useless, under-achieving joker who's there for the laughs...
Hi! i like this! And i've loved the Kawachi-Tsukino pairing since i dunno when, so i really appreciate your work. And i've always felt that poor Kawachi deserves to be taken a bit more seriously, rather than always playing the role of the useless, under-achieving joker who's there for the laughs...
2/7/2006 c1 70Sheo Darren
Sweet! You caught the serious side of Yakitate and Kawachi down pat. And Tsukino was a lovely pleasure to look up to in this one. Absolute darling, that girl.
Niceness as always from you, MJP-san. More, please!
70Sheo DarrenSweet! You caught the serious side of Yakitate and Kawachi down pat. And Tsukino was a lovely pleasure to look up to in this one. Absolute darling, that girl.
Niceness as always from you, MJP-san. More, please!