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2/8/2006 c1 13momiji-k
It just occured to me as I read this that we always hear about Roy's time in Ishvar but we don't hear about Riza as often. This was very interesting. It forms a good background to build a longer fic off of.

Good job. :)
2/8/2006 c1 18rizahawkeye21
sad but sweet. i really liked the ending but it kinda felt somwhat abrupt. u write very well and hope u continue to write more fics.
2/8/2006 c1 7xXsilentxwhisperXx
Aw! Twas very good! I love how the ending lets the reader decide for himself (or actually herself in my case) whether or not Riza's just hallucinating she wakes up with the whole Royai bit...At any rate, I loved it and the mechanics were flawless.

10/10

~Whisper
2/8/2006 c1 19evilteddybear
I'd like to read more of your stories. I like this one a lot. Wouldn't it be nice if we always had the one we loved to comfort us like in your story. Just reading about it makes me feel better. I always thought that no-one focused much on Riza's guilt from the war.
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