for A New Life9/13/2017 c1 COFFEE QUEEN 17
Guessing I have reached the end as it has been 11 years since an update. I like it though.
Guessing I have reached the end as it has been 11 years since an update. I like it though.
5/2/2017 c7 heathermarshall
oh god this is the best please update! Lorelei and Finn Sr. never read one like this before
oh god this is the best please update! Lorelei and Finn Sr. never read one like this before
10/31/2011 c7 
28Heart.Or.Head
Loved the begining but its slowly losing its, i dont know what you call it but yeah still good though.
28Heart.Or.HeadLoved the begining but its slowly losing its, i dont know what you call it but yeah still good though.
6/25/2010 c7 JJsMommy27
You so need to update this story you were doing a good job on it so please complete it
You so need to update this story you were doing a good job on it so please complete it
5/3/2010 c7 Tigermusic
still awsome keep it coming :) im looking forward to read more off it pretty soon so keep the great work u :D
still awsome keep it coming :) im looking forward to read more off it pretty soon so keep the great work u :D
12/12/2009 c7 kelsey112
wow i hope rory and tristan get together soon coz they ares cute together plz finish this soonb
wow i hope rory and tristan get together soon coz they ares cute together plz finish this soonb
12/10/2009 c4 Writingperson
Liked the story.
you misspelled the 4th french line though
Mademoselle should be Mademoiselle
the 'mademoselle' would be pronounced "ma-d-mwo-selle"
while 'mademoiselle' would be pronounced "ma-d-mwa-selle"
so the 'oi' allow the pronunciation to become 'wa' if after the 'm' which it is here. I think it was just a typo on your side anyway so I figured you wouldn't mind someone who speaks fluent french to correct you. I didn't think to correct the others since they're mostly correct and only this one seemed blatant (your beta should have been able to correct the others).
Liked the story.
you misspelled the 4th french line though
Mademoselle should be Mademoiselle
the 'mademoselle' would be pronounced "ma-d-mwo-selle"
while 'mademoiselle' would be pronounced "ma-d-mwa-selle"
so the 'oi' allow the pronunciation to become 'wa' if after the 'm' which it is here. I think it was just a typo on your side anyway so I figured you wouldn't mind someone who speaks fluent french to correct you. I didn't think to correct the others since they're mostly correct and only this one seemed blatant (your beta should have been able to correct the others).
5/25/2007 c7 30rnl1993
great chapter and finn getting mad because he can't wear a pink vest i could picture that, update when you get the chance and congrats on the new computer.
30rnl1993great chapter and finn getting mad because he can't wear a pink vest i could picture that, update when you get the chance and congrats on the new computer.
5/25/2007 c4 rnl1993
great chapter i am now listening to bad to the bone, it was great. I loved this chapter. can't wait to see finns reaction
great chapter i am now listening to bad to the bone, it was great. I loved this chapter. can't wait to see finns reaction
4/27/2007 c7 26Norwegianchick101
wait a sec, you said homecoming and then u said prom? which one is it?
second, love love love this story! I always thought that if Lorelai and Finn were the same age they would be perfect together. putting her with his dad is a genius and totally original idea!
26Norwegianchick101wait a sec, you said homecoming and then u said prom? which one is it?
second, love love love this story! I always thought that if Lorelai and Finn were the same age they would be perfect together. putting her with his dad is a genius and totally original idea!