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3/26/2006 c1 3Winter Bean
Oh wow this is really really really good and I really mean it please please please write more fics

~Al
2/11/2006 c1 azna-azure
very well written^^

i like the way you portrayed the feelings of the characters. it's angst-y and very deep. i can actually feel the anguish of both cagalli and athrun...(wait...i can? nvr mind)

even though this is one-shot fic, i can't help myself from thinking that you could write more^^ (yeah, me and my stupid brain...) it was all because although athrun found his comfort, cagalli kinda did not. she looks like she is sacrificing herself (i mean she's bottling her emotions: sadness etc.)

but, oh well, like i said, maybe it was just me:3

anyway, first story or not, it's good^^ don't ever degraded yourself.
2/10/2006 c1 1Sunflower Seeds
Nice Fic! Write more!
2/10/2006 c1 43ovp
Nice story.

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