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12/18/2006 c1 12Ice Dagger
That's so cute! He brought home a police horse! I laughed out loud when I read that. And the ending was so typical Mikey. Heehee.
11/5/2006 c1 Ted
That was really cute, the way Mikey kept bringing all the animals home! I can just imagine that horse in the lair.

I was a bit confused about who was thinking, "Wow! The horse's name was Mikey?" At first I thought it was Splinter, as the rest of the story had been in his POV. But I can't picture Splinter using the word 'wow'.

Anyway, this was really funny and cute.
2/22/2006 c1 18Goddess of Idun
How the SHELL did Mikey bring a HORSE into the SEWERS? lol!
2/15/2006 c1 16Redwaters
I had a feeling that it was big pet, but I didn't think it was going to be a horse. (For some reason, I thought it was little human ^^;.)

Cute as usual with your storys Cyn. Keep them up.
2/13/2006 c1 Flora
Ha! That. Was awesome.

That was so well done that the 'suspend your disbelief' warning was completely unnecessary. You took care of that for us.

The part about wanting a sister was too rich! As if Splinter doesn't have enough little menaces running about...
2/13/2006 c1 2greshunkai
what do you mean "suspend disbelief"? it was all perfectly believable to me! who wouldn't want a horse? the best way for Splinter to explain to Mikey why NOT to take someone else's horse is to describe the penalty such a theft provokes. but maybe they've seen enuf westerns on TV to know about that. a real neat bit of work, thank you!
2/13/2006 c1 203BubblyShell22
Cute story, Cyn. Loved the last line the most. Little does Mikey know what the future holds for him, huh? Write another good story soon. You rock on this.

The Bubbly One,

Shell
2/12/2006 c1 53Jessiy Landroz
LMAO! Oy, Mike you never learn... and Don't worry,m you'll get your kitty in due time, but gosh golly, a HORSE? and a PD horse at that? Kid, what were you thinking? LOL!

and Sensei, don't spank him hard, if you get the chance, though I'm sure he'll figure out a way to smooth his way out of it before you do =P

wonderful oneshot, Cyn, you really had me going, for a very long moment, I thought he had a big dog or something, but never did I think it could have been a horse! (hoe do horses fit in the sewers, anyway?) anyway, good job XD
2/12/2006 c1 1Doppleganger33
That was hilarious. My goodness you have a gift for this. And for making poor Splinter probably pull out his fur in patches.
2/12/2006 c1 16Tewi
a HORSE! omg! how did he get it into the sewers!

whatever...

anyway, great story! loved how the horse's name was also Mikey! and how Mikey can always be so upbeat and be like so can i have a kitty! hahaha! loved it!
2/12/2006 c1 28innocent-rebel
That was so cute!*hugs Mike* A horse? now that was creative! Great job!
2/12/2006 c1 8Reijiro
Was starting to wonder just how Mikey had managed to liberate something from the zoo, or had he dragged home the albino croc? Soon as he called it 'Silver' though I guessed it, the fact the beastie was brown just clinched it. lol!

And I always thought Mikey would love to have a sister.

-insert usual, well deserved compliments here-

Cheers!
2/12/2006 c1 57Reinbeauchaser
Wonderful as always. You are closing in on de-thronging the queen of chibi stories, you do know that don't ya. And we dearly love our Splinter, so.,.tread carefully, Cynlee. Bwahahaha

This was very cute and I loved it. On to my C2 it goes. My fav file is full unfortunately, but I have another 'list' it might fit well in.

Anyway, great job with this!

Be blessed.
2/12/2006 c1 Liz-Kaguya
That was great! That was soo funny! You do discriptions so well I felt as if I were standing there watching this story unfold, I liked the hole idea about Mikey bringing home a turtle and asking Master Splinter if he could make it a baby sister for him, that was cute.

Liz & Kaguya
2/12/2006 c1 10Machias Banshee
*cackles*

Aw, this was so Cute! I loved all the descriptions of Mike's attempts to tug at his father's heartstrings.

Snatching a Police Officer's horse was definitely creative, if not naughty. Mikey's definitely going to have a sore tail after This tale...

You make me wanna draw SO much from your stories. If only I didn't have all this homework!
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