
2/19/2012 c2 cougartail99
another very good chapter. Also i might as well say this which is that you forgot one of the lines in the song but all in all it was another very good chapter. One more thing which is that i can not wait to read the next chapters.
another very good chapter. Also i might as well say this which is that you forgot one of the lines in the song but all in all it was another very good chapter. One more thing which is that i can not wait to read the next chapters.
2/19/2012 c1 cougartail99
a very good chapter. also before i review the second chapter my i ask who is playing princess jasmine in your parody.
a very good chapter. also before i review the second chapter my i ask who is playing princess jasmine in your parody.
12/4/2007 c2
197Luiz4200
Clay: Perfect timing, Clay!
Isn't it supposed to be Raimundo's line? And I think Omi should play the role of the arrogant prince who appears in this part of the story. He fits the role better than Jack. And Kimiko's Father, Toshiro, is perfect for the role of Sultan. Both are more interested in toys rather than their work and are guillible [sp?] enough to trust a villain. Kimiko herself fits as princess Jasmine. And I think the blind swordsman should be the genie. Please update.

Clay: Perfect timing, Clay!
Isn't it supposed to be Raimundo's line? And I think Omi should play the role of the arrogant prince who appears in this part of the story. He fits the role better than Jack. And Kimiko's Father, Toshiro, is perfect for the role of Sultan. Both are more interested in toys rather than their work and are guillible [sp?] enough to trust a villain. Kimiko herself fits as princess Jasmine. And I think the blind swordsman should be the genie. Please update.
10/28/2007 c2 Zutaralover101
LOVE IT!Even though it's an XS version of the disney movie,It's still awesome!Update it soon!I can't wait to read the rest!
LOVE IT!Even though it's an XS version of the disney movie,It's still awesome!Update it soon!I can't wait to read the rest!
7/4/2007 c2
9MoonliteWriter
Hahaha
I love this story, I was in an Aladdin Musical, so I can sing most of the songs
I love how Chase is jaffar, jack is iago, clay is abu, raimundo is aladdin, haha
Keep Writing
Moonlitewriter

Hahaha
I love this story, I was in an Aladdin Musical, so I can sing most of the songs
I love how Chase is jaffar, jack is iago, clay is abu, raimundo is aladdin, haha
Keep Writing
Moonlitewriter
8/14/2006 c2
3misty4ever
I love this so much!
Keep it up; keep going!
You're doing awesome, and I really mean that.

I love this so much!
Keep it up; keep going!
You're doing awesome, and I really mean that.
8/14/2006 c1 misty4ever
THis is so exciting!
I love it. I'll read it when I can...
But wow!
Please write more!
Love, misty4ever
THis is so exciting!
I love it. I'll read it when I can...
But wow!
Please write more!
Love, misty4ever
7/11/2006 c2
28princ3ssch3rri3bl0ss0m724
Me: That was great!
Rai: Why did they call me Aladdin?
GIR: CHEESE MUNCHIES!

Me: That was great!
Rai: Why did they call me Aladdin?
GIR: CHEESE MUNCHIES!
7/10/2006 c2 Hanbags
Great Job! Just one thing U kinda put Aladdin intstead of Raimundo. But hey its a easy mistake to do! Please update soon!
Great Job! Just one thing U kinda put Aladdin intstead of Raimundo. But hey its a easy mistake to do! Please update soon!
7/10/2006 c2
5Akiko142
Erm, this is plagerism. 'Cause you're copying the dialouges from the movie "Alladin"
You should take this off. This isn't allowed.

Erm, this is plagerism. 'Cause you're copying the dialouges from the movie "Alladin"
You should take this off. This isn't allowed.
7/10/2006 c2
1ThieveingLegend
Like I didn't think Rai was Alladin my bro thought it was Jack. I almost throtled him. Man everything happens to Raimundo. And I ain't complaining. Please update soon! Peace out to ya!
-XM

Like I didn't think Rai was Alladin my bro thought it was Jack. I almost throtled him. Man everything happens to Raimundo. And I ain't complaining. Please update soon! Peace out to ya!
-XM
4/4/2006 c1 Manslaughter-Is-Laughter
This is good! I cant wait for the next chapter, so please please update soon! Thanks hun!
This is good! I cant wait for the next chapter, so please please update soon! Thanks hun!
2/26/2006 c1 tobedeleted87
OMG! your wording is spot on! well done..though it would have been a bit more interesting is wuya was iargo and JACK was Aladdin...humm there's an idea, maybe i'll do that, would you be mad if i did?-great fic so far by the way!
OMG! your wording is spot on! well done..though it would have been a bit more interesting is wuya was iargo and JACK was Aladdin...humm there's an idea, maybe i'll do that, would you be mad if i did?-great fic so far by the way!