
8/13/2020 c1 Guest
loved it eventhuoh it was so short
loved it eventhuoh it was so short
8/18/2019 c1 Sparrow White
Ah, yes. One of the strong threads of romance can be a yearning feeling because one is trapped or stuck, and this situation has this quality in spades. And who better here than dreamy Luna herself?
While I do indeed often enjoy epic stories, drabbles and short stories have their place too. This one doesn't need a sequel; it works as is. Also, I am happy to see only one spelling error here (which puts you ahead of certain other authors): I believe that it's "bludger" not "blodger." If it helps, remember the word "bludgeon."
You may be long gone at this point, but in case you are not, keep up the good work!
Ah, yes. One of the strong threads of romance can be a yearning feeling because one is trapped or stuck, and this situation has this quality in spades. And who better here than dreamy Luna herself?
While I do indeed often enjoy epic stories, drabbles and short stories have their place too. This one doesn't need a sequel; it works as is. Also, I am happy to see only one spelling error here (which puts you ahead of certain other authors): I believe that it's "bludger" not "blodger." If it helps, remember the word "bludgeon."
You may be long gone at this point, but in case you are not, keep up the good work!
8/17/2019 c1 Sparrow White
Ah, yes. One of the strong threads of romance can be a yearning feeling because one is trapped or stuck, and this situation has this quality in spades. And who better here than dreamy Luna herself?
While I do indeed often enjoy epic stories, drabbles and short stories have their place too. This one doesn't need a sequel; it works as is. Also, I am happy to see only one spelling error here (which puts you ahead of certain other authors): I believe that it's "bludger" not "blodger." If it helps, remember the word "bludgeon."
You may be long gone at this point, but in case you are not, keep up the good work!
Ah, yes. One of the strong threads of romance can be a yearning feeling because one is trapped or stuck, and this situation has this quality in spades. And who better here than dreamy Luna herself?
While I do indeed often enjoy epic stories, drabbles and short stories have their place too. This one doesn't need a sequel; it works as is. Also, I am happy to see only one spelling error here (which puts you ahead of certain other authors): I believe that it's "bludger" not "blodger." If it helps, remember the word "bludgeon."
You may be long gone at this point, but in case you are not, keep up the good work!
5/3/2017 c1 LunaLover
Adorable. I've always thought that Luna was the girl of Harry's dreams, but I've never seen a fic take that concept so literally. :) So many smiles over this one.
Adorable. I've always thought that Luna was the girl of Harry's dreams, but I've never seen a fic take that concept so literally. :) So many smiles over this one.
5/20/2014 c1 Donal
Good, but might have been better if you had kept them as friends, although it's not so farfetched for them to end up together. Still, it's a nice story.
Good, but might have been better if you had kept them as friends, although it's not so farfetched for them to end up together. Still, it's a nice story.
6/30/2012 c1 dragonlordrb
Quite enjoyable, though I would have thought that since I think I remember them meeting in Harry's 3rd or 4th year that you would have gotten them together then.
Quite enjoyable, though I would have thought that since I think I remember them meeting in Harry's 3rd or 4th year that you would have gotten them together then.