for Humps9/26/2008 c1 
13MoonlightPrincess5sixthousand
I hump giraffes and bad fiction writers.
*hump hump*
UNF!
13MoonlightPrincess5sixthousandI hump giraffes and bad fiction writers.
*hump hump*
UNF!
2/17/2006 c1 5AMarieKelley
Nice! I like it! Is there going to be more or is this one of those 1 chapter stories? Anyway, I'll be looking for more of your works!
5AMarieKelleyNice! I like it! Is there going to be more or is this one of those 1 chapter stories? Anyway, I'll be looking for more of your works!
2/17/2006 c1 Evana
Even though I like SS/HG, it doesn't seem like you put much thought into this oneshot. They didn't seem to be in character at all.
Even though I like SS/HG, it doesn't seem like you put much thought into this oneshot. They didn't seem to be in character at all.
2/17/2006 c1 perturbed
I don't understand why mindless smut like this is all over fanfiction sites. This is not fanfiction. This kind of story doesn't belong here.
There ARE adult erotica sites you could post things like this in. Here's a tip: If you can't substitute the names of all the characters in your story with generic names, like "Jack" and "Jill" in this case, and have readers still be able to figure out its Rowling's characters "Severus" and "Hermione" just by reading it, then you haven't written good fanfiction. You've written your own plot, story, etc and just substituted Harry Potter names in there.
I don't understand why mindless smut like this is all over fanfiction sites. This is not fanfiction. This kind of story doesn't belong here.
There ARE adult erotica sites you could post things like this in. Here's a tip: If you can't substitute the names of all the characters in your story with generic names, like "Jack" and "Jill" in this case, and have readers still be able to figure out its Rowling's characters "Severus" and "Hermione" just by reading it, then you haven't written good fanfiction. You've written your own plot, story, etc and just substituted Harry Potter names in there.
2/17/2006 c1 KCHAPUT15
That's sick anyone willing to have sex with Snape is dumb in my opion
That's sick anyone willing to have sex with Snape is dumb in my opion
2/17/2006 c1 Great
This was awsome, don't listen to them *blows rasberry at mean people* You rock! This story was cute, slightly graphic, but dosn't show too much. this is a perfect example of HGSS, keep it up!
This was awsome, don't listen to them *blows rasberry at mean people* You rock! This story was cute, slightly graphic, but dosn't show too much. this is a perfect example of HGSS, keep it up!
2/17/2006 c1 GAbbana
Hot ;D
Hot ;D
2/17/2006 c1 1Patronoussavior449
... This is kind of weird... I don't really like snape/hermione fics... I dunno maybe this is a joke..
1Patronoussavior449... This is kind of weird... I don't really like snape/hermione fics... I dunno maybe this is a joke..