for Forever and a Day1/18/2013 c1 
114words-with-dragons
Oh my god this was so beautiful and i'm crying and i'm not even bothering to use proper punctuation or grammar man this is bad i'm this was perfect...that poor little girl...but like the poem said, she didn't die, not really. she's just in heaven, where her family will join her, eventually, just like Ginny's greeting Harry right now...oh my god! can i favourite this a thousand times over? stupid favouriting!
I LOVED THIS!
114words-with-dragonsOh my god this was so beautiful and i'm crying and i'm not even bothering to use proper punctuation or grammar man this is bad i'm this was perfect...that poor little girl...but like the poem said, she didn't die, not really. she's just in heaven, where her family will join her, eventually, just like Ginny's greeting Harry right now...oh my god! can i favourite this a thousand times over? stupid favouriting!
I LOVED THIS!
5/28/2006 c1 8ms james potter
i love it. the whole concept. that harry wrote the letter while he was with ginny, that he knew what was to come and what she would need to hear .. wow. i love it.
8ms james potteri love it. the whole concept. that harry wrote the letter while he was with ginny, that he knew what was to come and what she would need to hear .. wow. i love it.
4/25/2006 c1 32BobtheFrog
Wow...I love the poem at the end! And the entire letter except in this sentence- "That was the best night of my life, baby." I don't think it should say 'baby'...doesn't sound like something Harry would say...it sounds jock-ish...you are free to disagree.
Gilove2dance
32BobtheFrogWow...I love the poem at the end! And the entire letter except in this sentence- "That was the best night of my life, baby." I don't think it should say 'baby'...doesn't sound like something Harry would say...it sounds jock-ish...you are free to disagree.
Gilove2dance
4/1/2006 c1 13quidditch7
Wow. My thoughts aren't too clear right now and my vision a bit blurry from tears (haha!) so this may be a scatter-brained review.
First off, THIS WAS AMAZING. haha..Every single word in this story was poetic and made me think deeply about it. I re-read Harry's letter twice because it was probably the sweetest thing I've ever read.
I loved this line: 'Because the two of us - well, it’s going to take a lot more than death to break us apart.'.
ah, how darling is that? I'm so glad that Ginny was able to move on yet it was a relief to see that she wasn't "complete" with out Harry.
The title was amazing and I loved the bits where Harry is saying that she'll never lose him and where she can find him, and how they'll be together again someday. I def. love that boy to pieces, he's ALWAYS trying to protect people and he just wouldn't be Harry if he wasn't trying to.
The whole bit about how Ginny "was ready to be whole again" that was a brilliant line. I loved it.
Your a very talented writer, great fic girl.
-quidditch7
13quidditch7Wow. My thoughts aren't too clear right now and my vision a bit blurry from tears (haha!) so this may be a scatter-brained review.
First off, THIS WAS AMAZING. haha..Every single word in this story was poetic and made me think deeply about it. I re-read Harry's letter twice because it was probably the sweetest thing I've ever read.
I loved this line: 'Because the two of us - well, it’s going to take a lot more than death to break us apart.'.
ah, how darling is that? I'm so glad that Ginny was able to move on yet it was a relief to see that she wasn't "complete" with out Harry.
The title was amazing and I loved the bits where Harry is saying that she'll never lose him and where she can find him, and how they'll be together again someday. I def. love that boy to pieces, he's ALWAYS trying to protect people and he just wouldn't be Harry if he wasn't trying to.
The whole bit about how Ginny "was ready to be whole again" that was a brilliant line. I loved it.
Your a very talented writer, great fic girl.
-quidditch7
2/24/2006 c1 7Hannielou
Wow. That made me tear. That was intense and vey well written. And, as I am of the opinion that Harry won't surivive the final battle with Voldemort, I liked how you handled Ginny's grief. Please, please, please write more!
7HannielouWow. That made me tear. That was intense and vey well written. And, as I am of the opinion that Harry won't surivive the final battle with Voldemort, I liked how you handled Ginny's grief. Please, please, please write more!
2/22/2006 c1 3cntpny
that was beautiful, i am blubbering like a baby! it was so sweet. where did you get the poem, i would like to offer my condolences to the people's families. Anyway, please write more!
luv maddie
3cntpnythat was beautiful, i am blubbering like a baby! it was so sweet. where did you get the poem, i would like to offer my condolences to the people's families. Anyway, please write more!
luv maddie
2/22/2006 c1 Schnuff
if Harry real wrote this letter, it was a cruel thing for him to do. ok he says something about moving on but the whole letter is about that he is always with her and that she can't forget him. so in the end he has made her life real real bad
if Harry real wrote this letter, it was a cruel thing for him to do. ok he says something about moving on but the whole letter is about that he is always with her and that she can't forget him. so in the end he has made her life real real bad
2/20/2006 c1 abandoningthisaccount2024
*wimper* that... *sniff* was... *cries* BEAUTIFUL!
*stands up ans claps*
I'm just, just, so... IN AWE!
Very well written, very emotional, made me cry.
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Be sure to keep on sending in new stories such as this.
I look forward to a new, breath-taking, read.
*wimper* that... *sniff* was... *cries* BEAUTIFUL!
*stands up ans claps*
I'm just, just, so... IN AWE!
Very well written, very emotional, made me cry.
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Be sure to keep on sending in new stories such as this.
I look forward to a new, breath-taking, read.
2/20/2006 c1 3GinnyGin
That was brilliant :)
The last line made me go "Wait, what?" and I wish there was more explination of that... but, I understand that it works much better without an explination. So, fine. :P
But, this was extremely well-written and you did an amazing job. I love it! ;)
And, yes, it is absolutely necessary to end every sentence with a smiley face of some kind. :)
3GinnyGinThat was brilliant :)
The last line made me go "Wait, what?" and I wish there was more explination of that... but, I understand that it works much better without an explination. So, fine. :P
But, this was extremely well-written and you did an amazing job. I love it! ;)
And, yes, it is absolutely necessary to end every sentence with a smiley face of some kind. :)