7/2/2006 c1 26rewind gone nuts
An interesting idea, and well-written so far. Please continue, though I'd personally like a little development of the plot in subsequent chapters (for example: precisely why the vid-game items are appearing in the TT dimension).
An interesting idea, and well-written so far. Please continue, though I'd personally like a little development of the plot in subsequent chapters (for example: precisely why the vid-game items are appearing in the TT dimension).
6/26/2006 c1 4Numbuh 214
CONTINUE THIS! I happened to see a drawing like this on DeviantArt: Funny coincidence that you gave the same power to the same Titan. But, other than that, the only way to improve is to CONTINUE!
CONTINUE THIS! I happened to see a drawing like this on DeviantArt: Funny coincidence that you gave the same power to the same Titan. But, other than that, the only way to improve is to CONTINUE!