for Last Line5/26/2011 c1 awesome
dude u have to continue this story! i wanna know if they get rescued or not! i urge u to write some more!
dude u have to continue this story! i wanna know if they get rescued or not! i urge u to write some more!
2/2/2010 c1 
7huge sg1 fan
That was a really good story. It was sad but I still enjoyed reading it. I liked how they said goodnight instead goodbye. I thought it was a very interesting and well written story.
7huge sg1 fanThat was a really good story. It was sad but I still enjoyed reading it. I liked how they said goodnight instead goodbye. I thought it was a very interesting and well written story.
8/12/2006 c1 167 League Boots
Whoa. Well done, but *sobbing here* so SAD! Excellent capture of Sam and Daniel's friendship. Heck of a whump-tale; graphic but necessarily so in this setting. Dialogue works for them. Great talent for tragedy; our heroes are served well.
167 League BootsWhoa. Well done, but *sobbing here* so SAD! Excellent capture of Sam and Daniel's friendship. Heck of a whump-tale; graphic but necessarily so in this setting. Dialogue works for them. Great talent for tragedy; our heroes are served well.
2/23/2006 c1 2KseniaNZ
I read this, knowing from your warning of char death, that one of them would die. So I was constantly wondering which one it would be...so I was in for a shock at the end. Well done, as it kept me guessing yet still surprised me!
2KseniaNZI read this, knowing from your warning of char death, that one of them would die. So I was constantly wondering which one it would be...so I was in for a shock at the end. Well done, as it kept me guessing yet still surprised me!
2/22/2006 c1 Sasha1471
I really liked your story. I know it was ment to be a one off but could you write a sequel maybe that they are found just in time or they are revived in the sarcofiges (sorry I cna't spell) and kept for a little while till they are rescued. I hate character deaths they are so sad but like I said I did like your story
I really liked your story. I know it was ment to be a one off but could you write a sequel maybe that they are found just in time or they are revived in the sarcofiges (sorry I cna't spell) and kept for a little while till they are rescued. I hate character deaths they are so sad but like I said I did like your story