
1/28/2007 c1
3uvasoccerchick93
Aw! That was AMAZING! I loved it. I think you should coninue! (i know it's a oneshot,but u can't blame me for trying right?) lol.

Aw! That was AMAZING! I loved it. I think you should coninue! (i know it's a oneshot,but u can't blame me for trying right?) lol.
4/7/2006 c1 CharrrmedONE
cute. i really hope things turn out this good...but the way things are going it doesnt really llok that way...do you agree?
cute. i really hope things turn out this good...but the way things are going it doesnt really llok that way...do you agree?
2/23/2006 c1 Maja
Great story I hope to see something like this on TV soon.
Great story I hope to see something like this on TV soon.
2/23/2006 c1 disgruntledJJfan
stupid april. stupid anna. stupid lukebeinganassholeandjerk. stupid ASP. Great Story though, i really liked your writing style. But no turtleisabridesmaid kind of thing.
stupid april. stupid anna. stupid lukebeinganassholeandjerk. stupid ASP. Great Story though, i really liked your writing style. But no turtleisabridesmaid kind of thing.
2/23/2006 c1 orangesherbert7
aww. great emotions and it seems like theyre back to normal at the end. i loved it. i loved all of their talks and stuff. everything was how i can imagine the characters feeling. i loved it
aww. great emotions and it seems like theyre back to normal at the end. i loved it. i loved all of their talks and stuff. everything was how i can imagine the characters feeling. i loved it
2/23/2006 c1
5TheSecretsSafeWithMe
This is great. I really like your writing! I like the way that the dialogue really seemed to carry the story, but you gave just enough description for the reader to visualize your intent. At the same, you didn't weigh us down with describing every little thing. We were allowed to play in the boundaries you gave us. I think that's a hard line to teeter on as a writer, but you did it very well!

This is great. I really like your writing! I like the way that the dialogue really seemed to carry the story, but you gave just enough description for the reader to visualize your intent. At the same, you didn't weigh us down with describing every little thing. We were allowed to play in the boundaries you gave us. I think that's a hard line to teeter on as a writer, but you did it very well!
2/23/2006 c1
19alittlebitbails
Wow. Amazing work. Definately one of my favorites, it was so sweet. I liked how you wrote April. Everything about Lorelai's doubts was great.

Wow. Amazing work. Definately one of my favorites, it was so sweet. I liked how you wrote April. Everything about Lorelai's doubts was great.
2/23/2006 c1 GilmoreLover
Wonderful little story! That's the way it's supposed to be. Thanks for writing it!
Wonderful little story! That's the way it's supposed to be. Thanks for writing it!
2/23/2006 c1
3Daphnetjuh
Aww that was really sweet! I hope it's going to be something like this on the show too!

Aww that was really sweet! I hope it's going to be something like this on the show too!