for Rearview Mirrors6/22/2012 c1 slinky89
I've read quite a few stories about our beloved Jess and Rory. I have never come across something so pure and sweet. It was heart warming and innocent, just like the image portrayed in the show. I loved your words and had a smile on till the end.
I've read quite a few stories about our beloved Jess and Rory. I have never come across something so pure and sweet. It was heart warming and innocent, just like the image portrayed in the show. I loved your words and had a smile on till the end.
3/10/2006 c1 Heather
Aww! That was too adorable! I loved that! Very well written! I can't wait to read more things by you.
Aww! That was too adorable! I loved that! Very well written! I can't wait to read more things by you.
2/24/2006 c1 NickiCullen
I really liked your story. I like that it's nice and romantic...i'm a big rory/jess shipper!
Nice work
I really liked your story. I like that it's nice and romantic...i'm a big rory/jess shipper!
Nice work
2/24/2006 c1 
10tragicallyepic
Um...uh...wow...That was...wow. I don't know what to say. That was amazing and remarkable, and brilliant and I loved it. And OMG Lit Sex! My favorite part:
He pummeled into her the way that he was normally pummel her with his quirks. A cigarette here and there. The first book that his late mother gave him that still sat at the bottom of his trunk. The first pair of earrings that she left over at the apartment.
She was absolutely drunk. Stinking drunk and loving it. It would be post-coital, but never hang-over. She loved being this drunk. He was better than any liquor she could ever taste against her lips. He was just so much better than that.
He felt her blend into him as he neared the end, felt her psyche go blank. It made the room feel very quiet when her mind stopped working.
It was hazy again. Not that Indian summer hazy. It was hazy like sweet May rain making fog that you only see in your rearview mirror.
He was her sweet May rain in her rearview mirror.
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I wish I had talent like that. That one-shot was just amazing and I loved it!
10tragicallyepicUm...uh...wow...That was...wow. I don't know what to say. That was amazing and remarkable, and brilliant and I loved it. And OMG Lit Sex! My favorite part:
He pummeled into her the way that he was normally pummel her with his quirks. A cigarette here and there. The first book that his late mother gave him that still sat at the bottom of his trunk. The first pair of earrings that she left over at the apartment.
She was absolutely drunk. Stinking drunk and loving it. It would be post-coital, but never hang-over. She loved being this drunk. He was better than any liquor she could ever taste against her lips. He was just so much better than that.
He felt her blend into him as he neared the end, felt her psyche go blank. It made the room feel very quiet when her mind stopped working.
It was hazy again. Not that Indian summer hazy. It was hazy like sweet May rain making fog that you only see in your rearview mirror.
He was her sweet May rain in her rearview mirror.
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I wish I had talent like that. That one-shot was just amazing and I loved it!
2/24/2006 c1 2just hidden
"He was her sweet May rain in her rearview mirror." nice way to end it. good job.
2just hidden"He was her sweet May rain in her rearview mirror." nice way to end it. good job.
2/24/2006 c1 15someone5
Oh my god. You just made my entire day! This is so amazing. So, so amazing. Your use of the Indian Summer as support for their undying chemistry, then the May rain...just, all of it was spectacular. This in particular is just brilliant:
"It was hazy again. Not that Indian summer hazy. It was hazy like sweet May rain making fog that you only see in your rearview mirror.
He was her sweet May rain in her rearview mirror."
*falls in love* Thank you for this, Cody. :) I love love love it.
::hugs::
Nicolle
15someone5Oh my god. You just made my entire day! This is so amazing. So, so amazing. Your use of the Indian Summer as support for their undying chemistry, then the May rain...just, all of it was spectacular. This in particular is just brilliant:
"It was hazy again. Not that Indian summer hazy. It was hazy like sweet May rain making fog that you only see in your rearview mirror.
He was her sweet May rain in her rearview mirror."
*falls in love* Thank you for this, Cody. :) I love love love it.
::hugs::
Nicolle
2/24/2006 c1 5Certifiably Insane
I love this. I love you. I love lit sex. I'm a bath tub full 'o love today, my freind!
Oh and I think I forgot to review the ficcie of all fics. I apologise profusely and will absolutely get right on it soon, but alas, revision, Macbeth and learning how to multiply fractions awaits. :(
Kat
5Certifiably InsaneI love this. I love you. I love lit sex. I'm a bath tub full 'o love today, my freind!
Oh and I think I forgot to review the ficcie of all fics. I apologise profusely and will absolutely get right on it soon, but alas, revision, Macbeth and learning how to multiply fractions awaits. :(
Kat
2/24/2006 c1 1Rellik
Ko...
You write with words how Monet paints with watercolours. Beautiful. I would have more to say than that if this were crappy. But it's very not crappy. It's superb. The only shame is it does not have much character voice. But it certainly catches their emotions and actions wonderfully. Very nice stuff. ^_^
1RellikKo...
You write with words how Monet paints with watercolours. Beautiful. I would have more to say than that if this were crappy. But it's very not crappy. It's superb. The only shame is it does not have much character voice. But it certainly catches their emotions and actions wonderfully. Very nice stuff. ^_^