
2/25/2006 c1
4xCrazyx
OMG! That is so freaky! Please write more son. You did a terrific job with this chapter. I love the way you stretched the dialoge to increase the suspense. Most writers just put "You can't be here!" "Why?" "You're dead!" Whoopadeedooda. Once again wonderful, stupendous, job!
Trinity

OMG! That is so freaky! Please write more son. You did a terrific job with this chapter. I love the way you stretched the dialoge to increase the suspense. Most writers just put "You can't be here!" "Why?" "You're dead!" Whoopadeedooda. Once again wonderful, stupendous, job!
Trinity
2/25/2006 c1
1JamiePaige101
i love storys like this!this is really good so far!update soon please!
Jamie Paige

i love storys like this!this is really good so far!update soon please!
Jamie Paige
2/25/2006 c1 HitTheRoadMack
Evil! how could you leave me on the cliffhanger like that, really good great idea Update soon!
Evil! how could you leave me on the cliffhanger like that, really good great idea Update soon!
2/25/2006 c1
10XxCrash.And.BurnXx
EXPLAIN! NOW! not later! NOW! i need to know what's going on here! KEEP GOING, GIRL!
*Lyssa C.*

EXPLAIN! NOW! not later! NOW! i need to know what's going on here! KEEP GOING, GIRL!
*Lyssa C.*