for Meant to live3/8/2008 c1 lodt
Check out Lords of Dogtown ff! RIP Heath Ledger!
Check out Lords of Dogtown ff! RIP Heath Ledger!
3/9/2006 c1 
6Bastila
I liked your song choice and the writing along with it. You have an idea that could be, and conceptually it already is, great.
However-
Watch your grammar- just tiny, tiny little nitpicks here and there. If you're going to be turning this piece in for a language project, moreover, you should proofread it better. Especially in a class, much less online, bad grammar makes you sound at best lazy- no matter how small the mistakes are.
Other than that, good job. [Grammar rant done]
6BastilaI liked your song choice and the writing along with it. You have an idea that could be, and conceptually it already is, great.
However-
Watch your grammar- just tiny, tiny little nitpicks here and there. If you're going to be turning this piece in for a language project, moreover, you should proofread it better. Especially in a class, much less online, bad grammar makes you sound at best lazy- no matter how small the mistakes are.
Other than that, good job. [Grammar rant done]