for The Chimera: More Snake than Lion11/14/2021 c8 
3Yaw613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.
3Yaw613Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.
1/14/2020 c8 Nippledora Tweaks
Never finished this abortive drek, did you? Don't worry; I found a use for it; I'm going to print it out and employ it as toilet paper whenever I'm running low, and need something to wipe up after a particularly explosive bout of diarhea. Ta-Ta for now!
Never finished this abortive drek, did you? Don't worry; I found a use for it; I'm going to print it out and employ it as toilet paper whenever I'm running low, and need something to wipe up after a particularly explosive bout of diarhea. Ta-Ta for now!
4/26/2018 c8 1Midots
hope the next update would come soon.
thank you for this. great story and original twists.
1Midotshope the next update would come soon.
thank you for this. great story and original twists.
4/19/2018 c2 12Hit1903
man great story but you made tonks wimpy in many scenes and very straight forward in other
it was like she was bipolar
12Hit1903man great story but you made tonks wimpy in many scenes and very straight forward in other
it was like she was bipolar
2/10/2018 c8 Davey
It's a shame this is abandoned it's really good and well thought out.
It's a shame this is abandoned it's really good and well thought out.
7/25/2017 c2 ACR
The fuck is all this?!
I came here for a dark(ish), non naïve Harry story but here you are feeding us with the same sappy crap almost every other author does.
He hasn't even met Tonks for two minutes and he's crying because she's in pain.
And this engineered relationship with Cho Chang just annoys me, wasn't she the one who betrayed the DA? Or are you going to make an OC just for that purpose?
Stories like these sicken me, not only are you disregarding human reactions and behavior but you seem to be off the opinion that by translating to us Harry's thoughts of:
'Not being Naïve'
and (my favorite) 'I don't love her, I just hold deep affection for her, now let me shag her and hope I get struck by cupid’
somehow we'll sympathize with the character and ignore the obviously fake reactions.
Now I'm aware this is your story and you can do what you like, but by Jove man, try to be a little rational.
Sincerely,
A concerned reader.
The fuck is all this?!
I came here for a dark(ish), non naïve Harry story but here you are feeding us with the same sappy crap almost every other author does.
He hasn't even met Tonks for two minutes and he's crying because she's in pain.
And this engineered relationship with Cho Chang just annoys me, wasn't she the one who betrayed the DA? Or are you going to make an OC just for that purpose?
Stories like these sicken me, not only are you disregarding human reactions and behavior but you seem to be off the opinion that by translating to us Harry's thoughts of:
'Not being Naïve'
and (my favorite) 'I don't love her, I just hold deep affection for her, now let me shag her and hope I get struck by cupid’
somehow we'll sympathize with the character and ignore the obviously fake reactions.
Now I'm aware this is your story and you can do what you like, but by Jove man, try to be a little rational.
Sincerely,
A concerned reader.
3/20/2017 c7 Yifto
What the fuckk!? Nooo. ! Tonks! Is she just obliviating some secret things so she doesn't betray Harry or is she obliviating Harry from her memory?!
What the fuckk!? Nooo. ! Tonks! Is she just obliviating some secret things so she doesn't betray Harry or is she obliviating Harry from her memory?!
12/31/2016 c8 1Meerhawk
This is a really good story. I wish you had finished it instead of leaving it open.
1MeerhawkThis is a really good story. I wish you had finished it instead of leaving it open.
12/30/2016 c8 4Hadrian von Eveschatten
Gringotts got what it deserved for all the shit it pulled on Harry.
Another point in favour of Harry being good boyfriend material is his sartorial sense.
People who add milk or cream to their tea make me cringe. There is ice tea, bubble/milk tea, and then there is tea that you drink straight up. The slight/medium bitterness is part of the package.
Goddamn, I didn't even consider that Harry and Nym were fucking behind Cho's back. Open and timely communication is key to making a relationship work, so Harry should have told Cho immediately after he took Nym the first time. However, the scheme Nym cooked up is stupidly convoluted just to ensure their successful threesome.
The story just got to the good part when you decided to abandon it. I at least want to see Harry 2.0 unmasking himself to the world and leave Dumblefuck speechless and sputtering!
4Hadrian von EveschattenGringotts got what it deserved for all the shit it pulled on Harry.
Another point in favour of Harry being good boyfriend material is his sartorial sense.
People who add milk or cream to their tea make me cringe. There is ice tea, bubble/milk tea, and then there is tea that you drink straight up. The slight/medium bitterness is part of the package.
Goddamn, I didn't even consider that Harry and Nym were fucking behind Cho's back. Open and timely communication is key to making a relationship work, so Harry should have told Cho immediately after he took Nym the first time. However, the scheme Nym cooked up is stupidly convoluted just to ensure their successful threesome.
The story just got to the good part when you decided to abandon it. I at least want to see Harry 2.0 unmasking himself to the world and leave Dumblefuck speechless and sputtering!