for Crossing the Line12/23/2009 c6 
1riendeau
i love you
i love this world
i love my finger nails
i love that i can say i love
but more than all i love this fanfic
im over here trying to hold my laughs in -making these weird noises doing it
and my older brother is looking at my as if i was sent down from another world to make him lose his mind (ok ok i am dont tell him)
you need to write the next chapter like NOW !
please ~~
1riendeaui love you
i love this world
i love my finger nails
i love that i can say i love
but more than all i love this fanfic
im over here trying to hold my laughs in -making these weird noises doing it
and my older brother is looking at my as if i was sent down from another world to make him lose his mind (ok ok i am dont tell him)
you need to write the next chapter like NOW !
please ~~
5/17/2009 c6 4Emeralddragon694
Nice Story. "Those. mean. nothing." You're a great author! Poor Tomoyo though. Kuro-chan's kinda a psycho...
4Emeralddragon694Nice Story. "Those. mean. nothing." You're a great author! Poor Tomoyo though. Kuro-chan's kinda a psycho...
5/24/2008 c6 5Fai'swingedchronicles
ah dont shut fai up i wanted to hear his lovely singing voice...lol love it! it be funny if the thing that saves them is something of complete stupidity...like fais lovely singing voice!
5Fai'swingedchroniclesah dont shut fai up i wanted to hear his lovely singing voice...lol love it! it be funny if the thing that saves them is something of complete stupidity...like fais lovely singing voice!
3/30/2007 c4 VenusRising
I love Kurogane so so much. And I find his "protection" of Tomoyo hilarious. I also love her tea set with imaginary tea.
I love Kurogane so so much. And I find his "protection" of Tomoyo hilarious. I also love her tea set with imaginary tea.
12/17/2006 c6 r
Err . . . this story is getting more and more fangirlish the more I continue reading. -tries to stop her eyes from bleeding- You made all the characters from these two series very OOC, I don't think one is in character. I think Kurogane and Syaoran are the most out of character, and I think the best part of this story is when Toya and Yukito thought Fai was a yaoi god. XD So bizzare. Also, Sakura and Syaroan are not bland characters, unless you watch Cardcaptors where they butchered them to pieces. XD Card Captor Sakura for the win!
Err . . . this story is getting more and more fangirlish the more I continue reading. -tries to stop her eyes from bleeding- You made all the characters from these two series very OOC, I don't think one is in character. I think Kurogane and Syaoran are the most out of character, and I think the best part of this story is when Toya and Yukito thought Fai was a yaoi god. XD So bizzare. Also, Sakura and Syaroan are not bland characters, unless you watch Cardcaptors where they butchered them to pieces. XD Card Captor Sakura for the win!
7/2/2006 c6 kieran
i love you. now please continue! xD This is a really good story, and such laughter being brought to my life is well appreciated. Keep up the good work! ^^
i love you. now please continue! xD This is a really good story, and such laughter being brought to my life is well appreciated. Keep up the good work! ^^
6/20/2006 c6 22bloodytwistedangel
I can see Fai reabid more than Kuro-Puu. Anyhow, Fai had an awesome role as a god/prisoner and I really, REALLY wished there was more ToyaYuki. Oh well.
Is this story going to end soon? (laughs)
We're reaching a climax... will Syaoran retrieve Sakura's feather...? will it be explained how Sakura's managed to stay awake for a whole five hours...? Will Kurogane blame the manjuu for last night's lonliness...? Okay. Yeah. I cheese things up. That's me.
Boo-Yah. great Strand.
~B.T.A. Ria-Chan has lost it...
22bloodytwistedangelI can see Fai reabid more than Kuro-Puu. Anyhow, Fai had an awesome role as a god/prisoner and I really, REALLY wished there was more ToyaYuki. Oh well.
Is this story going to end soon? (laughs)
We're reaching a climax... will Syaoran retrieve Sakura's feather...? will it be explained how Sakura's managed to stay awake for a whole five hours...? Will Kurogane blame the manjuu for last night's lonliness...? Okay. Yeah. I cheese things up. That's me.
Boo-Yah. great Strand.
~B.T.A. Ria-Chan has lost it...
6/19/2006 c4 29Phiso
Fai makes a lovely God. ^_^ I can't help but read his parts outloud. Oh, and to make it flow more, connects dialouge and narration lines together instead of separating them. ^_^ On to the next chappie!
29PhisoFai makes a lovely God. ^_^ I can't help but read his parts outloud. Oh, and to make it flow more, connects dialouge and narration lines together instead of separating them. ^_^ On to the next chappie!
6/10/2006 c6 21ImperialGuardian09
Um... wow. Yeah... I think when Fai was freaking out about the whole "Mokona is missing" thing, that was hiliarious...
...rabbit stew...
I say no more! Nice chapter! Can't wait for the next, but please don't sic Kurogane on me... then I'll have to pull out my wild card...um...wait, *they ran away again?* oh well. Later!
21ImperialGuardian09Um... wow. Yeah... I think when Fai was freaking out about the whole "Mokona is missing" thing, that was hiliarious...
...rabbit stew...
I say no more! Nice chapter! Can't wait for the next, but please don't sic Kurogane on me... then I'll have to pull out my wild card...um...wait, *they ran away again?* oh well. Later!
6/6/2006 c5 9chaos-naga
Hah! *LMAO!* This is REALLY funny. Hey, the only part I found bad was that TRC-Syaoran and TRC-Sakura are VERY OOC in this. Try to make them a little more IC!
-kk.
9chaos-nagaHah! *LMAO!* This is REALLY funny. Hey, the only part I found bad was that TRC-Syaoran and TRC-Sakura are VERY OOC in this. Try to make them a little more IC!
-kk.