for Crossing the Line6/2/2006 c5 
3atinykerfuffle
GLEEFUL LIKKLE TURTLES!
LOLZ!
*twirls around in circles*
I LUV IT!
its hilarious!
, i just LOVE it!
ALL HAIL THE ALMIGHT FAI, RULER OF YAOI!
lolz
:D
3atinykerfuffleGLEEFUL LIKKLE TURTLES!
LOLZ!
*twirls around in circles*
I LUV IT!
its hilarious!
, i just LOVE it!
ALL HAIL THE ALMIGHT FAI, RULER OF YAOI!
lolz
:D
6/2/2006 c5 3RevivedSin
What... the... HELL? OMG WTF OMFG! (dies of laughter but comes back to life) *ahem* I deem this story with the Most Randomness OOC story EVER! in fanfiction history award.
props to you. :P
3RevivedSinWhat... the... HELL? OMG WTF OMFG! (dies of laughter but comes back to life) *ahem* I deem this story with the Most Randomness OOC story EVER! in fanfiction history award.
props to you. :P
6/2/2006 c2 Yuen
ROFLMAO~~ This is CRAZY! But OMG so funny~~ XD
ROFLMAO~~ This is CRAZY! But OMG so funny~~ XD
6/1/2006 c1 19Sithking Zero
About your summary...
YAY BAGELS!
Though seriously, you have what looks like a good story. However, you are taking things a little fast. My opinion for the first three chapters: Re-do them, not much, but just add some spaces in between paragraphs. This makes it much easier to read. Otherwise, this looks pretty good.
19Sithking ZeroAbout your summary...
YAY BAGELS!
Though seriously, you have what looks like a good story. However, you are taking things a little fast. My opinion for the first three chapters: Re-do them, not much, but just add some spaces in between paragraphs. This makes it much easier to read. Otherwise, this looks pretty good.
5/29/2006 c4 tsukiryou
Rofl, this is absolutely hilarious! Yay for Fai the yaoi king, amd Kuro-pan protecting Tomoyo is also so amusing. Good job, I can't wait to read more!
Rofl, this is absolutely hilarious! Yay for Fai the yaoi king, amd Kuro-pan protecting Tomoyo is also so amusing. Good job, I can't wait to read more!
5/22/2006 c4 themightylupe
this story has a great start except for the fact Li got problem... and thought Syaoran was a clow card... and tried to attack him... lol this story is awsome update!
this story has a great start except for the fact Li got problem... and thought Syaoran was a clow card... and tried to attack him... lol this story is awsome update!
5/10/2006 c4 Sunfrost
AHH! My oreos! *grabs* *starts eating* CONTINUE!
AHH! My oreos! *grabs* *starts eating* CONTINUE!
5/9/2006 c4 21ImperialGuardian09
Poor poor Tomoyo! I feel sorry for her now! To have nightmares aobut Kurogane, of all people!
I love this story so far, and I do hope you write more. Have faith in yourself... maybe you'll write faster...lol
Just kidding; take your time if you need it. I'm patient... awesome chapter! Later!
21ImperialGuardian09Poor poor Tomoyo! I feel sorry for her now! To have nightmares aobut Kurogane, of all people!
I love this story so far, and I do hope you write more. Have faith in yourself... maybe you'll write faster...lol
Just kidding; take your time if you need it. I'm patient... awesome chapter! Later!
5/9/2006 c4 4Mew Frost
hehehe, personally i like the kuro-tomoyo parts. *giggles insanely*
~Mew Frost~
4Mew Frosthehehe, personally i like the kuro-tomoyo parts. *giggles insanely*
~Mew Frost~
5/4/2006 c3 BabyPenguin
Whoa, this is by far the best CCSTRC cross over I have seen so far! Loving it! It's hilarious! Syaoran (little one from CCS) is a right little (Swear word) in this fic! Aw, he's still cute!
Update soon!
BP
xox
Whoa, this is by far the best CCSTRC cross over I have seen so far! Loving it! It's hilarious! Syaoran (little one from CCS) is a right little (Swear word) in this fic! Aw, he's still cute!
Update soon!
BP
xox
4/25/2006 c3 24applecherry
I think... you need some help in editing. (If you need help with that, I'm free) It's easier to read if the paragraphs are neat and seperated. Grammar is okay but I noticed some confusions. Although, plot is good! Quite interesting and funny. I like the choice of words. But the formatting is still bothersome. It's good, but I have the feeling you can make it more than that. Hope it will be better next update!=)
Good Luck!=)
24applecherryI think... you need some help in editing. (If you need help with that, I'm free) It's easier to read if the paragraphs are neat and seperated. Grammar is okay but I noticed some confusions. Although, plot is good! Quite interesting and funny. I like the choice of words. But the formatting is still bothersome. It's good, but I have the feeling you can make it more than that. Hope it will be better next update!=)
Good Luck!=)