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9/27/2006 c3 4x-KaffY-BaBii-x
hehe.. cute story! Update soon!

Luvz Ya Kaffy
7/30/2006 c3 4Dreamstar13
Are you going to be doing more games? And, you should make your chapters longer. Eitherwise, please update soon.

Dreamstar13
7/30/2006 c2 Dreamstar13
You're getting a little better and being descriptive. Now, and more description and longer chapters.

Dreamstar13

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7/30/2006 c1 Dreamstar13
That was actually pretty good. Though you probably need more description. Well, bye.
4/5/2006 c3 aashhess
very awsome...i never heard of that game, did you make it up? well it was really cool plz update?
3/2/2006 c2 aashhess
Totally awsome!Plz update

~Inuyashafanfreak~
3/1/2006 c2 6lilcutieprincess
you are exelent. you are brealent!
3/1/2006 c2 1x.charliethepony
You have really good ideas and there are some cute moments. Jus tyou need to slow down and describe everything, the story's kinda jumping from one thing to the next... Other than that it's good. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter..!

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