for Mystery at RainTree8/6/2014 c3 Guest
i know this story is really old but noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
THAT CANT BE THE END
I NEED MORE
MORE
MORE I TELL YOU!
i know this story is really old but noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
THAT CANT BE THE END
I NEED MORE
MORE
MORE I TELL YOU!
2/9/2011 c3 wolfgirl731
pleasse,please,please,please continue! ANd btw, u EALLY need to spell chec and grammar check ur writings... PLEASE HAVE MORE CHAPTERS!
pleasse,please,please,please continue! ANd btw, u EALLY need to spell chec and grammar check ur writings... PLEASE HAVE MORE CHAPTERS!
11/30/2010 c3 anonymous
Please make more chapters to your story it's sooooo good!
Please make more chapters to your story it's sooooo good!
12/24/2008 c3 
27SarahJeanne7
I really like this story so far! But I really hope that Kris will choose Junior over Matt. I also hope that Kris will be okay obviously and I am really anxious to find out what is wrong with her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
27SarahJeanne7I really like this story so far! But I really hope that Kris will choose Junior over Matt. I also hope that Kris will be okay obviously and I am really anxious to find out what is wrong with her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
5/26/2008 c3 princess of punk 619
This chapter continues right? Does Kris wake up in the hospital or does she wake up on the concrete? E-mail me when you get a chance,k! :) :) :) ^ ^
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This chapter continues right? Does Kris wake up in the hospital or does she wake up on the concrete? E-mail me when you get a chance,k! :) :) :) ^ ^
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5/9/2008 c3 Nicole
SO GOOD but too short! lol. and no way can kris fall for matt! krunior all the way! lol UPDATE SOON! :)
SO GOOD but too short! lol. and no way can kris fall for matt! krunior all the way! lol UPDATE SOON! :)
1/19/2007 c4 2starshollow108
ok first off i absolutly love this story! please keep going!
second i have a few ideas... i don't know if they are any good but here they are: 1. you have kris be sick for a while with whatever you want her to have... it could just be something like pneumonia. then you could have the stuggles with them trying to figure out what to do with wildfire and stuff. or 2. you could have it be something more serious and have kris decide between an extremely dangerous surgery and giving up riding.
these are just some ideas cause this is a really good story and i don't think you should stop!
please please please keep going with this story... it has some great potential!
2starshollow108ok first off i absolutly love this story! please keep going!
second i have a few ideas... i don't know if they are any good but here they are: 1. you have kris be sick for a while with whatever you want her to have... it could just be something like pneumonia. then you could have the stuggles with them trying to figure out what to do with wildfire and stuff. or 2. you could have it be something more serious and have kris decide between an extremely dangerous surgery and giving up riding.
these are just some ideas cause this is a really good story and i don't think you should stop!
please please please keep going with this story... it has some great potential!
12/26/2006 c2 chloe
PLEASE DO NOT DO NOT DELETE YOUR STORY TOTALLY ROCKS
PLEASE DO NOT DO NOT DELETE YOUR STORY TOTALLY ROCKS
4/27/2006 c2 anonymus sry can't spell
when are u gonna add more hurry cause this story's rly god!
when are u gonna add more hurry cause this story's rly god!
4/25/2006 c3 chadfanatik
ill review a lot more if yu write more of your story!
ill review a lot more if yu write more of your story!