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18helloitskrisha
I did not expect the ending! I read the summary but seem to have forgotten the slash warning haha. I thought this was going to be E/C at first, but I actually like that you went with E/R. It makes the work more poignant somehow, more of a forbidden love type of story. This was so well-written, and, as someone who loves sad/tragic stories, I loved it!
18helloitskrishaI did not expect the ending! I read the summary but seem to have forgotten the slash warning haha. I thought this was going to be E/C at first, but I actually like that you went with E/R. It makes the work more poignant somehow, more of a forbidden love type of story. This was so well-written, and, as someone who loves sad/tragic stories, I loved it!
7/28/2015 c1 magneticfield
To me the Phantom Of The Opera always was a love triangle Erik, Raoul, and Christine. If you include the persian's feelings for Erik it gets more complicated. I had always sensed that in the original book and even more so in Kay's Phantom. Myself I always felt that the Persian and Erik belonged together.
So being, I was not shocked by the ending. But I think Leroux's spirit is sitting somewhere reading this story and saying "say what" ?
To me the Phantom Of The Opera always was a love triangle Erik, Raoul, and Christine. If you include the persian's feelings for Erik it gets more complicated. I had always sensed that in the original book and even more so in Kay's Phantom. Myself I always felt that the Persian and Erik belonged together.
So being, I was not shocked by the ending. But I think Leroux's spirit is sitting somewhere reading this story and saying "say what" ?
2/8/2007 c1 5Corculum
I myself was so shocked because I thought it was Eric digging up Raoul o_O;
Doubt arose only when I read that he was buried under the Opera House, I was like 'Really?... o_O Did Eric kill him or something _; (fit of rage or something? ^^;; ) '
And then the second last line I was like 'Wait...' and then the last line 'O_O ZOMG'
And then 'Oh... o_o'
And you didn't need a narration of my every reaction to every line ^^;; sowwie ehe...
Anyway yes, twisted but so... romantic at the same time @_@ I'm not surprised it won an award.
Great work ^_^
5CorculumI myself was so shocked because I thought it was Eric digging up Raoul o_O;
Doubt arose only when I read that he was buried under the Opera House, I was like 'Really?... o_O Did Eric kill him or something _; (fit of rage or something? ^^;; ) '
And then the second last line I was like 'Wait...' and then the last line 'O_O ZOMG'
And then 'Oh... o_o'
And you didn't need a narration of my every reaction to every line ^^;; sowwie ehe...
Anyway yes, twisted but so... romantic at the same time @_@ I'm not surprised it won an award.
Great work ^_^
5/24/2006 c1 MadLizzy
I managed to miss the slash warning, and I have to say, I was jolted by the ending. I thought it was brilliant! Thank you for posting it. ~ML
I managed to miss the slash warning, and I have to say, I was jolted by the ending. I thought it was brilliant! Thank you for posting it. ~ML
3/8/2006 c1 fictionreader
Wow, that was very well written...so poetic...and leaves us readers to ponder as there are so many psychological possibilities.
Wow, that was very well written...so poetic...and leaves us readers to ponder as there are so many psychological possibilities.
3/7/2006 c1 sporkish fiend
Whoo, Ghostie! I loved your style in this- despite having read the reviews on POL first and hearing people's indignations about the "OMGSLASH", I was shocked by the ending. It's so gripping throughout the whole thing! Very good and solid, didn't lose my interest at all. Good job! :D
Whoo, Ghostie! I loved your style in this- despite having read the reviews on POL first and hearing people's indignations about the "OMGSLASH", I was shocked by the ending. It's so gripping throughout the whole thing! Very good and solid, didn't lose my interest at all. Good job! :D
3/7/2006 c1 16the daroga
Ooh, I love this. I actually was surprised by the ending, as (in my twisted little mind) I'd assumed it was the Persian, as he had a rather closer relationship with Erik than Raoul did. But Raoul works, too. Twisted and sweet, I liked it. And normally a present-tense style will keep me from reading anything at all, but I think it works here for the immediacy and the mystery preserved until the final moment. Very nice.
16the darogaOoh, I love this. I actually was surprised by the ending, as (in my twisted little mind) I'd assumed it was the Persian, as he had a rather closer relationship with Erik than Raoul did. But Raoul works, too. Twisted and sweet, I liked it. And normally a present-tense style will keep me from reading anything at all, but I think it works here for the immediacy and the mystery preserved until the final moment. Very nice.
3/7/2006 c1 1PhantomsHeart
Whoa! Was NOT expecting the slash! I thought it was Erik digging up Christine for the first line or two, but when the dampness is mentioned, I thought, "Oh, it must be under the Opera House, therefore it must be Christine digging up Erik." Not quite, lol. Nicely twisted. :)
1PhantomsHeartWhoa! Was NOT expecting the slash! I thought it was Erik digging up Christine for the first line or two, but when the dampness is mentioned, I thought, "Oh, it must be under the Opera House, therefore it must be Christine digging up Erik." Not quite, lol. Nicely twisted. :)
3/6/2006 c1 17ZGory
When I saw the slash warning I thought that it was either Erik digging up Raoul or vice versa.Once you said that he was in the cellars of the Opera House I knew who was finding who.Good story.Sad that he must die at the end.Is Christine still alive?
17ZGoryWhen I saw the slash warning I thought that it was either Erik digging up Raoul or vice versa.Once you said that he was in the cellars of the Opera House I knew who was finding who.Good story.Sad that he must die at the end.Is Christine still alive?
3/6/2006 c1 47stefanie bean
Instead of burying Erik, someone's digging him up. Someone who loves him. I don't want to say too much in this review, as people sometimes read reviews before they read the story. I think it was good for a first foray, and encourage you to keep on.
47stefanie beanInstead of burying Erik, someone's digging him up. Someone who loves him. I don't want to say too much in this review, as people sometimes read reviews before they read the story. I think it was good for a first foray, and encourage you to keep on.