for Dancing5/21/2008 c1 
3Hime Pie
Great vocabulary! I really understood what was happening and when it was occuring. Instart fave, just like you to me!
3Hime PieGreat vocabulary! I really understood what was happening and when it was occuring. Instart fave, just like you to me!
10/1/2007 c1 1Whistlebird
You know... I really like this one! It's very mysterious and interesting, especially for a first!
1WhistlebirdYou know... I really like this one! It's very mysterious and interesting, especially for a first!
4/15/2007 c1 5hsmgirl14
honestly...i'm kind of confused by this one...but its still pretty good. i love miles! i think hes such a cutie. lol.
5hsmgirl14honestly...i'm kind of confused by this one...but its still pretty good. i love miles! i think hes such a cutie. lol.
10/17/2006 c1 4Amaryllis Estyre
...wow. I really liked that. XD A lot. Of course it was confusing; it's great in that it really makes you think about what's going on instead of just laying it out in front of you. Kudos on an effort that was in no way wasted.
4Amaryllis Estyre...wow. I really liked that. XD A lot. Of course it was confusing; it's great in that it really makes you think about what's going on instead of just laying it out in front of you. Kudos on an effort that was in no way wasted.
7/12/2006 c1 21peppaoceangal
blueteeth - now you know who i am, yes i have finally signed up, this story is good but it isnt as good as your other surface one.
21peppaoceangalblueteeth - now you know who i am, yes i have finally signed up, this story is good but it isnt as good as your other surface one.
4/1/2006 c1 2DarkPsion
I really think you could DELETE THIS STORY! It SUCKS! I don't see a point to it, and it is just plain confusing. you wrote it well and could make MUCH better stories than this. Make other stories and forget this one. Im sorry if this is dissapointing; but it's true.
-DarkPsionics
P.S. Make another story and just forget this one.
2DarkPsionI really think you could DELETE THIS STORY! It SUCKS! I don't see a point to it, and it is just plain confusing. you wrote it well and could make MUCH better stories than this. Make other stories and forget this one. Im sorry if this is dissapointing; but it's true.
-DarkPsionics
P.S. Make another story and just forget this one.
3/26/2006 c1 Ocean Gal
way to go waterdragon!
you should do heaps more stories!
way to go waterdragon!
you should do heaps more stories!
3/23/2006 c1 12CandyCentric
*claps* :) - very nice!
But i don't think you should 'consider making this into a sequel', i think you should skip right past that part and straight to the 'here's chapter 2 folks'!
^_^ - would love to hear more :)
12CandyCentric*claps* :) - very nice!
But i don't think you should 'consider making this into a sequel', i think you should skip right past that part and straight to the 'here's chapter 2 folks'!
^_^ - would love to hear more :)
3/7/2006 c1 35darkling59
wow, nice!
It was a bit confusing at first but seemed to work out well. Is this supposed to happen before the tsunami when Miles is just noticing the affects of Nim's 'gift of life'?
Anyways, you should continue!
^_^
35darkling59wow, nice!
It was a bit confusing at first but seemed to work out well. Is this supposed to happen before the tsunami when Miles is just noticing the affects of Nim's 'gift of life'?
Anyways, you should continue!
^_^
3/7/2006 c1 TerraCotta
Shut it SkyHighFan. Atccually, your story sucked compared to this one.
I really like this, it was pretting interesting but had me kind of confused in the begining. :)
Shut it SkyHighFan. Atccually, your story sucked compared to this one.
I really like this, it was pretting interesting but had me kind of confused in the begining. :)
3/7/2006 c1 15Spooky4ever
Wow, that was interesting. i hope you consider continuing. not bad for your first fanfic!
15Spooky4everWow, that was interesting. i hope you consider continuing. not bad for your first fanfic!