8/6/2011 c6 Anonymous
Great story! One of the only ones that had me reading until the very end!
Great story! One of the only ones that had me reading until the very end!
6/23/2008 c6 Straight Edge Queen
I really like this chapter and story! I really want to know what happens! Please please update soon! :)
I really like this chapter and story! I really want to know what happens! Please please update soon! :)
12/26/2007 c6 10LobstarMonstar
oh...my...gosh...
LILLI! THAT LUCKY JERK! STEALING ALL THE GOOD GUYS SO THAT I CAN'T HAVE ANY!
hehe, good story. keep it up ;)
oh...my...gosh...
LILLI! THAT LUCKY JERK! STEALING ALL THE GOOD GUYS SO THAT I CAN'T HAVE ANY!
hehe, good story. keep it up ;)
8/23/2006 c6 fredfish
hae,hae datz kewl. but its lyk going to fast you should have elaborated on the quidich game and then the feast and maby when she went to bed she could have drempt bout Gred and Forge? tehe but hae hu am i to know but im looking foward to the next chapter if there is one...
happy writing
Fred
hae,hae datz kewl. but its lyk going to fast you should have elaborated on the quidich game and then the feast and maby when she went to bed she could have drempt bout Gred and Forge? tehe but hae hu am i to know but im looking foward to the next chapter if there is one...
happy writing
Fred
5/19/2006 c6 Echo and Mooni
From the other 2/3 of the Silver Trio: YOU ARE SO WEIRD! This does not follow cannon at all. Echo: And it scares me. Mooni: I thought you liked my cousin. Both: THIS DOESN'T FOLLOW THE BOOK! *Echo dies* *Mooni points and laughs* *Echo revives and hits Mooni with a stunning spell which hits her nose* Mooni: AVADA KADAVRA FANFIC!* Is Fluff afraid? Then go jump off the Leaning Oyster of Mars!
P.S.: Our favourite number of the alphabet is orange. The Skipping Alpaca Farm ROCKS !
From the other 2/3 of the Silver Trio: YOU ARE SO WEIRD! This does not follow cannon at all. Echo: And it scares me. Mooni: I thought you liked my cousin. Both: THIS DOESN'T FOLLOW THE BOOK! *Echo dies* *Mooni points and laughs* *Echo revives and hits Mooni with a stunning spell which hits her nose* Mooni: AVADA KADAVRA FANFIC!* Is Fluff afraid? Then go jump off the Leaning Oyster of Mars!
P.S.: Our favourite number of the alphabet is orange. The Skipping Alpaca Farm ROCKS !
5/16/2006 c6 WootWoot
Why do you leave me on such a cliffe? Ah! I love it, but don't make her memory go blank. Please?
~WootWoot
May you always have a FISH-ON-A-STICK
Why do you leave me on such a cliffe? Ah! I love it, but don't make her memory go blank. Please?
~WootWoot
May you always have a FISH-ON-A-STICK
5/12/2006 c6 2Miss Chant
I think you should flesh out Lilli a bit, if I'm being brutally honest, she's just tending to lean onto the Mary Sue side for me. I can help you with this if you want. :)
I also think it's a tad unrealistic to have her going out with both Fred and George. They're two different people, and probably wouldn't want to share her with anybody. But if you're really keen on the idea, I'd definitely insert some sibling jealousy to spice things up a bit before a final conclusion is come to.
I think you should flesh out Lilli a bit, if I'm being brutally honest, she's just tending to lean onto the Mary Sue side for me. I can help you with this if you want. :)
I also think it's a tad unrealistic to have her going out with both Fred and George. They're two different people, and probably wouldn't want to share her with anybody. But if you're really keen on the idea, I'd definitely insert some sibling jealousy to spice things up a bit before a final conclusion is come to.
5/2/2006 c4 WootWoot
I love it! Update soon! Stop the interrupting from other people! Update soon!
~WootWoot
May you always have a FISH-ON-A-STICK
I love it! Update soon! Stop the interrupting from other people! Update soon!
~WootWoot
May you always have a FISH-ON-A-STICK
4/17/2006 c3 WootWoot
OMG! I love it! You need to update it if only for me, WootWoot! I will continue to read to the rest of forever, if you keep writting!
~WootWoot
May you always have a FISH-ON-A-STICK
OMG! I love it! You need to update it if only for me, WootWoot! I will continue to read to the rest of forever, if you keep writting!
~WootWoot
May you always have a FISH-ON-A-STICK
3/15/2006 c2 2Muggleborn-Meghan1992
This story is really good! i cant wiat to see what you're going to do withit! does one of them like her too? do they both like her? give more fluff! awesome story! update asap!
This story is really good! i cant wiat to see what you're going to do withit! does one of them like her too? do they both like her? give more fluff! awesome story! update asap!
3/15/2006 c2 WootWoot
I love the waffles! It is really good! Update it soon! O will keep reading it! I love it comming fom her point of veiw! I love the whole Fred and George thing!
~WootWoot
May you always have a FISH-ON-A-STICK
I love the waffles! It is really good! Update it soon! O will keep reading it! I love it comming fom her point of veiw! I love the whole Fred and George thing!
~WootWoot
May you always have a FISH-ON-A-STICK
3/10/2006 c1 Kim
Bravo! :D
Unforunatly,I am in the same situation.There are two guys I like,but I don't know which one I want to go out with! Well,both of them but I can obvisiously cam date just have one.
Anyway,good chapter! Update soon! :)
Bravo! :D
Unforunatly,I am in the same situation.There are two guys I like,but I don't know which one I want to go out with! Well,both of them but I can obvisiously cam date just have one.
Anyway,good chapter! Update soon! :)