for What's Out There11/22/2017 c26 
7ISwearAngelWasThere
Wow! I really love this story! Im so glad you updated! You're a really good writer. Please write more I need to know what happens!
7ISwearAngelWasThereWow! I really love this story! Im so glad you updated! You're a really good writer. Please write more I need to know what happens!
1/22/2007 c24 16ickle-s-10
yay! an update!
wow, now i REALLY dont like corey. i mean, at least he seemed OKAY before (well, not abusive or anything), but now...urg.
i hope collins' dad is okay...or, at least collins gets to talk to him...
just a quick suggestion: because you kept going back and forth between angel and collins, it got a bit confusing...you might want to just put something between the paragraphs so that we know when the setting and pov is changing. xD thanks!
update soon please!
16ickle-s-10yay! an update!
wow, now i REALLY dont like corey. i mean, at least he seemed OKAY before (well, not abusive or anything), but now...urg.
i hope collins' dad is okay...or, at least collins gets to talk to him...
just a quick suggestion: because you kept going back and forth between angel and collins, it got a bit confusing...you might want to just put something between the paragraphs so that we know when the setting and pov is changing. xD thanks!
update soon please!
1/22/2007 c24 35Snicker Puff
I'm so happy you updated this fic :P And I really like the way you alternated between Collins' and Angel's POVs. It was a bit confusing at first, without any breaks, but I figured out the pattern quickly enough.
I like the way you portrayed Angel here, she's still strong, even though she may not be as strong as Cory. And I liked how you described Cory's surprise at how quickly Angel can run in heels :)
Great job! I'm trying to come up with some constructive criticism, but I don't really have any for this chapter... just that bit I mentioned about the breaks.
35Snicker PuffI'm so happy you updated this fic :P And I really like the way you alternated between Collins' and Angel's POVs. It was a bit confusing at first, without any breaks, but I figured out the pattern quickly enough.
I like the way you portrayed Angel here, she's still strong, even though she may not be as strong as Cory. And I liked how you described Cory's surprise at how quickly Angel can run in heels :)
Great job! I'm trying to come up with some constructive criticism, but I don't really have any for this chapter... just that bit I mentioned about the breaks.
1/21/2007 c23 11Looking4YouAgain
well not that it wasn;t a good story and the writting was really good! but this totally pissed me off first angel is so not angel! like angel was so bitchy and rude she knows ppl care about her and angel seemed so selfish like its always about her, then her flirting with guys that aren't collins! then this cory! its like she doesn't love collins anymore :( not to mention angel's mood swings like i said FANTASTIC story but not it pissed me off
11Looking4YouAgainwell not that it wasn;t a good story and the writting was really good! but this totally pissed me off first angel is so not angel! like angel was so bitchy and rude she knows ppl care about her and angel seemed so selfish like its always about her, then her flirting with guys that aren't collins! then this cory! its like she doesn't love collins anymore :( not to mention angel's mood swings like i said FANTASTIC story but not it pissed me off
1/9/2007 c23 16ickle-s-10
I HATE CORY!
Sorry, but I do. He's being really awful. I MIGHT understand if Angel hadn't told him about Collins, but she DID. And he STILL isn't backing off.
Grr...
Update soon please!
16ickle-s-10I HATE CORY!
Sorry, but I do. He's being really awful. I MIGHT understand if Angel hadn't told him about Collins, but she DID. And he STILL isn't backing off.
Grr...
Update soon please!
11/27/2006 c22 13tutriceange
Great Chapter! I don't think I've reviewed for a while...
but, I really do love this story! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
*cough*update soon*cough*
13tutriceangeGreat Chapter! I don't think I've reviewed for a while...
but, I really do love this story! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
*cough*update soon*cough*
11/27/2006 c22 16ickle-s-10
i dont like this cory! collins is better! angel'd better realize that soon...
16ickle-s-10i dont like this cory! collins is better! angel'd better realize that soon...