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11/3/2014 c1 vjean1997
If someone has continued this story let me know. It's really good.
6/3/2006 c1 mt
DO IT! PUT THIS IN BOOK FORM!
5/8/2006 c1 20That-Fresh-Rain-Smell
The so-called fun he had to witness up the 5 times a week was like pressing salt into already festering wounds. oh wow great word choice!

'But it was hard to keep telling himself to live for that. The Order despised him. Most of them thought of him as a Death Eater, not a spy. None of them saw the tortured, broken man he was. No, he was just evil.' oh...*heart breaks*

He was stronger than this, damn it! He would NOT let those voices win! what a snapeish thing to say...ha, im going to write that on a shirt..."i will not let the voices win!" ha...

yay! he's harrys father...hahahahahahaha! yay!

It pushed him over the edge, and for the first time in 17 years, Severus Snape wept. He wept for his past, his completely fucked up present, for the child he was never allowed to know, for the family he had never had the chance to love and for betrayal of the only man he had ever truly trusted.' oh that is so sad...*has tears in eyes*

'If someone had the urge to write this into a novel-length, let me know. I’d like to beta it :D' hm sounds like fun! cocoa-snape might have told you...i like to write responses and things to her story/chapters...so yeah, it sounds like fun, writing thisinto novle length and even adding onto it, i cant stand the cliffhanger ending that somehow puts me at peace...lol but i love it, its very good! ^-^

Kozi
5/6/2006 c1 milola
I like this one-shot...it´s a bit rushed but overall a decent story...
3/12/2006 c1 2Jan-AQ
Wow, awesome premise! I would definitely like to read more.
3/11/2006 c1 1TwilightShadows
Wow, this was a wonderful piece. Definitely gave me the urge to write more to it, but I seriously doubt anything I write would hold a candle to it. Hm...the possibilities are endless...

~Sarah~

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