12/31/2017 c3 carneyjarred
Nice chapter also I got a idea instead oh having ash's sister die like in the original have mewtwo clone ash's sister and transfer her memories and powers to the clone body.

8/28/2015 c28 1They call me Bruce
Nice work here, fella.

8/21/2015 c28 gump1098
This fanfic's like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get.

6/12/2015 c27 29Screaming Dean
The best parts of your revisions are the fact there's more filler to them. I'm happy to see you're doing that. Keep up the good work.

5/30/2015 c22 gump1098
your fanfic's like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're going to get.

5/26/2015 c20 29Screaming Dean
I'm happy to see your rewrite is doing so well. Keep up the good work.

4/28/2015 c12 hornofdesolation
I reiterate a criticism I made years ago before the revision. I dislike how you are not showing the youma some of the holders have. Otherwise I don't see anything wrong with you writing.